Re: Shocks by Chasz Misleading	Dovina 24.52.157.176	2-Jul-04/12:47 PM
Life is fatal.
Re: Blobby song$ by MR Blobby	MR Blobby 213.48.172.20	2-Jul-04/12:39 PM
Blobby blobby blob..?
Re: blobby sums +-*/ by MR Blobby	Dovina 24.52.157.176	2-Jul-04/1:06 PM
Answer 1: 77 Answer 2: 70
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	2-Jul-04/1:05 PM
May your harvest be speedily completed. Cheers.
Re: Recycled Stardust by Quarton	god'swife 4.233.115.99	2-Jul-04/2:52 PM
This thing is a total piece of shit that makes absolutely no sense. Time blahblahblahblah like flower petals blahblahblahblah Do you don your star trek costume and play this back on your computer voice generating program while jacking-off? Never mix ecstasy with vodka and PBS, it always turns out ugly. P.S. There's no such thing as time.
regarding some deleted poem...	god'swife 4.233.115.99	2-Jul-04/3:04 PM
I love the title.
Re: The Missing Peace by nothingtoanyone	god'swife 4.233.115.99	2-Jul-04/3:10 PM
I like the beginning and the idea behind this, you go off into unfortunately, into boring redundance. the last line's a stinker, corny & preachy.
regarding some deleted poem...	god'swife 4.233.115.99	2-Jul-04/3:13 PM
Niiiiiiiiice. The third stanza's especially beautiful.
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.86.113.159	2-Jul-04/1:17 PM
Going for the back of beyond, nothing's gonna stop you, there's nothing that strong, so close now, you're nearly at the brink so push it...
Re: Lady Bradbury’s Excursion by Dovina	Quarton 12.217.221.61	2-Jul-04/10:05 AM
You have taken the mundane and transformed it into art. About as original as any poem I have read in a long time. It takes a "leak" where it has never gone before and somehow does so in good taste. Womderful!
Re: Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 204.31.171.238	2-Jul-04/10:27 AM
Couldn't leave it alone. It's better this way me thinks. heh.
Re: today the world is beauty by nentwined	Dovina 24.52.157.176	2-Jul-04/11:23 AM
I've never quite felt this way. Either I feel happy to be an insignificant creature in a beautiful world, or I feel sad in a world that appears ugly. Maybe you mean awestruck at your littleness compared to Nature.
Re: Recycled Stardust by Quarton	SupremeDreamer 204.31.168.114	2-Jul-04/11:52 AM
An enjoyable read. Blessed with nine.
Re: today the world is beauty by nentwined	SupremeDreamer 204.31.168.114	2-Jul-04/11:54 AM
Sounds like a baby infant. Blessed with eight.
Re: Lost by arduinn	Mus Vai 165.21.154.12	2-Jul-04/7:52 AM
Yeh this one's real. I like it.
Re: Black Rose by arduinn	Mus Vai 165.21.154.12	2-Jul-04/7:53 AM
Yeh this one's cool too. Think I like the first one the best.
Re: Love Slain by Mus Vai	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.135	2-Jul-04/8:55 AM
At first glance on the recent poemes list, I thought the title was "Love Stain". Having eagerly clicked on it, you cannot even begin to imagine my disappointment at seeing the title was actually "Love Slain", and that the poeme was rife with lines like "This love just can never be". -10-
Re: Recycled Stardust by Quarton	Quarton 12.217.221.61	2-Jul-04/9:25 AM
You know, Zodiac, I always appreciate those who take the time to critique one of my poems and you are no exception. However, I cannot believe you are serious in stating that "every sentence" in my poem is "wrong." Perhaps you could enlighten me on those sentences or concepts you deem inaccurate. Such a blanket statement as yours needs some specifics and you offered none but rather, a meaningless indictment backed up by nothing concrete or even close to justify its validity.
Re: Recycled Stardust by Quarton	Quarton 12.217.221.61	2-Jul-04/9:48 AM
richa: Thank you for the comments on my poem and your belief that science and poetry are not compatible. I do, however, disagree and think there should be more, not less written on the subject. One major problem when writing about science or quantum mehanics, (cosmology), is the difficulty in avoiding abstractions but I believe that is acceptible considering the rich amount of material available and the fascination we all share for the universe and the meaning and purpose of life. Perhaps some of my other poems are more likely to portray this though I am sure some think my work is generally not good or of interest. (but I try)
regarding some deleted poem...	arduinn 165.21.83.247	2-Jul-04/6:29 AM
I like this a great deal.. but in my opinion, stanza 3 leaves a bit to be desired.. bcz i don't quite get what it means..