Re: Your New Apartment by jessicazee	zodiac 212.118.11.13	12-Mar-05/11:19 PM
Wicked.
Re: The Better Beggar by PodPoet	zodiac 212.118.11.13	12-Mar-05/11:18 PM
Does anyone really wonder if beggars are worse than advertisers? Jesus.
Re: a comment on Girl of my Dreams??? by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.24.227	12-Mar-05/11:18 PM
Actually this is about one of my little sister's friends hitting on me.
Re: Poem Will Come by PodPoet	zodiac 212.118.11.13	12-Mar-05/11:15 PM
Is this why you keep reposting that wretched "Pumped Up" poem?
Re: Never Did You by Dreammaker1024	zodiac 212.118.11.13	12-Mar-05/11:15 PM
This is simply awful. Can I make a recommendation? Please visit these poetry links: http://www.favoritepoem.org/poems/index.html http://www.slate.com/id/2114499/ http://www.poemranker.com/index.jsp And read until your eyeballs rupture. That's the only way your going to get close to writing a poem worth criticising. I'm not trying to be hard on you, by the way; that's seriously what everybody who wants to write presentable poetry has to do, and it shows in this poem that you haven't done it. Good luck, and let me know how it comes out! -zodiac
Re: Still, With Love by Dreammaker1024	zodiac 212.118.11.13	12-Mar-05/11:10 PM
What a sad story... -10-
Re: a comment on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.11.13	12-Mar-05/11:08 PM
And PS-If you were ever seriously confronted by the possibility that we weren't some roving gange of hooligans unreasonably banded together against you, but instead were sincerely and independently disgusted at the amount of muck illogic, bad grammar, email-forward subphilosophy, cronyism, and simply awful poetry you perpetrate on this site, would you jump screaming into your own uterus? I bet you would.
Re: Girl of my Dreams??? by thepinkbunnyofdoom	zodiac 212.118.11.13	12-Mar-05/11:00 PM
Your life is very dramatic. -10-
Re: The sparrow by woodstock20000	zodiac 212.118.11.13	12-Mar-05/10:58 PM
"Little sparrow, little sparrow, Precious fragile little thing Little sparrow, little sparrow Flies so high and feels no pain." - Dolly Parton "Who will love a little Sparrow? Who's traveled far and cries for rest? 'Not I,' said the Oak Tree, 'I won't share my branches with no sparrow's nest, And my blanket of leaves won't warm her cold breast.' Who will love a little Sparrow And who will speak a kindly word? 'Not I,' said the Swan, 'The entire idea is utterly absurd, I'd be laughed at and scorned if the other Swans heard.'" - Paul Simon
Re: How I got my Jacket back by luzrheroguy	zodiac 212.118.11.13	12-Mar-05/10:50 PM
If you've ever been closer to Amsterdam than Sacramento, I'm a cold cock. What I'm trying to say is, it shows.
Re: Sauvignon by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.11.13	12-Mar-05/10:45 PM
Have you ever drunk a bottle of wine costing more than, oh, $10? This is not poetry. It's a bad idea on its last legs.
Re: a comment on an unbiased voice (or the most biased one you'll hear) by i_am_the_popsicle	zodiac 212.118.11.13	12-Mar-05/10:43 PM
What do you mean by "here"? Are you in Iraq?
Re: a comment on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.11.13	12-Mar-05/10:38 PM
1) Would you say you're more, or less, opinionated than other people? 2) Hey, thanks for pointing out that it's biased. I might have gone the rest of my life believing slate.com was a fair and balanced news source. 3) Unfortunately it's biased toward the side you're supposed to be on (pretty moderate liberalism), and it still thinks you're one of them. 4) And Slate writers are about a dozen times smarter than you. 5) I would be horrified at the suggestion (from anyone, really, except you) that I was either a hopeless conservative hick or shared qualities with hopeless conservative hicks. But then, I'm not the one the article's describing. You are. 6) And thanks a lot for demonstrating how bow'ls isn't a real usage, how the "renegade poet comedians" you hate now are somehow different from the stuffy bastions of conservative poetry you hated a few months ago, or anything else to justify anything in this post. You're a total clod when it comes to arguing anything.
Re: The Lonely Man by i_am_the_popsicle	Dovina 12.72.7.90	12-Mar-05/5:46 PM
I rarely say this because it's a bum rule, but Show, don't Tell.
Re: Deep Thought by Dreammaker1024	Dovina 12.72.7.90	12-Mar-05/5:44 PM
Not really a poem.
Re: Sauvignon by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 208.57.91.57	12-Mar-05/5:26 PM
2buckchuck&awinesnob. This is a lovely cock-tale of deceit.-10-
Re: a comment on an unbiased voice (or the most biased one you'll hear) by i_am_the_popsicle	i_am_the_popsicle 64.12.116.195	12-Mar-05/5:18 PM
no one is commending saddam here, though perhaps the women should............(they got more rights then they do now).........
Re: a comment on bleeding by crooked_smile	crooked_smile 64.12.116.195	12-Mar-05/5:15 PM
why thankyou
Re: a comment on bleeding by crooked_smile	crooked_smile 64.12.116.195	12-Mar-05/5:14 PM
that wouldnt be much to brag about - lia
Re: a comment on Subtle Reasons by crooked_smile	crooked_smile 64.12.116.195	12-Mar-05/5:12 PM
of course i read your comment - lia