Re: a comment on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry	Blindpoetry 68.11.192.79	28-Dec-04/10:25 PM
Small, detailed grammar isn't important to me. You read it the same. Who cares.
Re: Storms by Jeremi B. Handrinos	Bhaskaryya 61.3.137.25	28-Dec-04/10:21 PM
Very beautiful!!!!
Re: Road Tripped by Blindpoetry	Bhaskaryya 61.3.137.25	28-Dec-04/10:20 PM
"Your going to jump my men" Ain't it supposed to be YOU ARE??
Re: a comment on you turned me evil by baphomet	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63	28-Dec-04/9:06 PM
I miss you Brandon, and I love you. I think you will be good at what ever You decide you'd like to be good at. I'd wish you a merry christmas, and say some stupid shit about life and love, and how things work, but I think you and I know better than that, and I also think we know eachother's minds, I am fine, the kids are great. you are an Uncle again to a beautiful Boy his name is Cyrus, maybe magic Like you and I, or maybe not. We'll see, I wrote a book, it was published. I finaly got a commercial, so a bit of money. I pray you are well, but I know you would tell me if you weren't. Sorry about mom, And I, but I've decided that she hurts my mind to much to be around, and because I'm A man, I can do that, she is a tsunami her aftermath disgusts even men of god. but you are a prince, and I am your brother Older, I might add, Our love is from the stars. We must always keep counsel.
Re: Math Poem 2 by Dovina	auscot 138.130.95.21	28-Dec-04/8:52 PM
This poem is disingenuous, is it some sort of avant garde form of writing to scare off readers and give poetry a bad name? Please, let's make poetry readable and enjoyable.
Re: Math Poem 2 by Dovina	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63	28-Dec-04/6:12 PM
jesus H. Christ.
Re: a comment on Portables by Shardik	Shardik 24.130.62.63	28-Dec-04/6:06 PM
Good guess.
Re: Christmas Break by Plaidypus	Dovina 69.175.6.101	28-Dec-04/6:01 PM
What does the last part of the poem, good as it is, have to do with the first verse?
Re: My brain’s dialogue by kawakurdi	Dovina 69.175.6.101	28-Dec-04/5:57 PM
Do you think the orgasnic matter in your head is you, or are you a being separate from that matter? Something more lasting?
Re: Portables by Shardik	Dovina 69.175.6.101	28-Dec-04/5:54 PM
Probably some bonsai and orchads too. Probably third generation American.
Re: a comment on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom	Dovina 69.175.6.101	28-Dec-04/3:00 PM
I like the Taoist idea of becoming like water in a brook that flows conformingly around the rocks in its path, sculpting them slowly, almost imperceptively over a long time.
Re: you turned me evil by baphomet	Shardik 24.130.62.63	28-Dec-04/2:47 PM
Lol, New York is a mighty place. You should fit in just fine.
Re: Distance by Lifeboatman	Dovina 69.175.6.101	28-Dec-04/2:37 PM
Too vague
Re: a comment on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom	dougsoderstrom 207.80.112.12	28-Dec-04/11:04 AM
FOR DOVINA: I'm sorry , I didn't mean to void your response to my poem...... I just got mixed up and marked the wrong response. But regarding your question, I think that the poem reflects the idea that I am in the process of becoming a Buddhuist-oriented Christian Humanist who would like to be in a Zen state of perpetual "letting be." Love, Doug
Re: a comment on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya	Blindpoetry 68.11.192.79	28-Dec-04/10:21 AM
I was referring to " (Surely FINGERING wouldn't be too decent lol). "
Re: a comment on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom	Blindpoetry 68.11.192.79	28-Dec-04/10:02 AM
I do it so much, i can't control myself and people stare at me for a while.
Re: a comment on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya	Bhaskaryya 61.0.144.14	28-Dec-04/9:34 AM
Yeah, i've read lots and lots of poems but not too many sestinas. While writing this all I did refer to was Elizabeth Bishop's Sestina. And the rules stated that it's better if the 6 words could be used in different forms but it's not complusory.
Re: a comment on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya	Blindpoetry 68.11.192.79	28-Dec-04/9:26 AM
Obviously, you haven't read much of the others poetry, then.
Re: Math Poem 2 by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	28-Dec-04/9:01 AM
What the hell are you talking about? This is just shit. Mathematically, this poeme is uninteresting. Unless you're fascinated by the fact that not all operators are identical. Poetically, all you've done is sprawl out this observation in a stupid, non-rhyming, tedious blanket of guff.
Re: Math Poem 2 by Dovina	richa 81.178.233.69	28-Dec-04/7:49 AM
Much better. The start is a bit weak, I would say if you want to write a maths poem use mathematical terms to give the poem better precision. 'Bumping about in randomness' and 'loosely connected', are too vague. They turn the reader off immediately. Other than that there is a more obvious natural progression in this poem than the previous one.