Re: a comment on "oh" by fevriere	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	23-Dec-04/10:42 AM
I don't not dislike it.
Re: there's no way out by oneglove	Yikes 205.188.116.67	23-Dec-04/10:08 AM
Quite melancholy. You've done a great job at holding the tone of this piece. Also, the descriptions were phenominal. 10, bravo.
Re: "oh" by fevriere	Yikes 205.188.116.67	23-Dec-04/10:01 AM
Ahh so appeasing. Bravo! The true art of a "Haiku-ist"
Re: a comment on Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	Bhaskaryya 61.0.144.120	23-Dec-04/9:17 AM
Neither am I a gayu nor an Islam. I am a HINDU and a heterosexual. (I thought the latter was pretty evident in my poems.)
Re: a comment on A Wanderlust To The New by fevriere	fevriere 62.254.128.4	23-Dec-04/8:54 AM
You're quite right. I think it needs going over with a ruler.
Re: a comment on "oh" by fevriere	fevriere 62.254.128.4	23-Dec-04/8:28 AM
Thank you. :)
Re: a comment on "oh" by fevriere	fevriere 62.254.128.4	23-Dec-04/8:27 AM
Mean? Dunno. I was trying to describe the sound of someone saying "oh". Do you dislike it?
Re: a comment on The Rockets’ Song by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.14.17	23-Dec-04/5:16 AM
Considering the context, I think we have to assume the deer is in the throes of love, menopause, or both.
Re: a comment on Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	zodiac 212.118.14.17	23-Dec-04/5:11 AM
I just finished checking out your homepage. I was surprised to see that you're a male. On a similar note, I was surprised today to learn that Islams have Gays like other places, and they act like Gays in other places do.
Re: Disable by blacksoul	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	23-Dec-04/4:48 AM
PLAGIARISM ALERT PLAGIARISM ALERT PLAGIARISM ALERT http://www.netacc.net/~gradda/lighter4.html see under "From Susan Tanguy"
Re: a comment on Disable by blacksoul	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	23-Dec-04/4:47 AM
Having a handicapped father I can tolerate. But plagiarism? Now that's another matter.
Re: a comment on Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	23-Dec-04/4:35 AM
For the love of Christ learn how to click on the 'Reply' button.
Re: Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	Bhaskaryya 61.0.144.77	23-Dec-04/4:24 AM
Happy Holidays to you, my good sir!!
Re: a comment on Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	horus8 24.130.62.63	23-Dec-04/12:20 AM
Oh okay, I'm sorry, god what was I thinking? Will you forgive me?
Re: Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	23-Dec-04/12:13 AM
Why don't you just drop the arrogance?? People have the right to comment what they think?? I didn't say your poem SUCKS. I liked it just fine, but I though it could have been improved. Anything wrong witrh improvements??? Isn't this what the comment box is for.. To leave your honest views?? I am not here to please your vanity or prick it either. I just told you what I honestly thought to be true. And besides, I have read much classier villanelles. I'd never accept it if you say PERHAPS and DRIPS are perfect rhymes. Come and tear my work apart. I'd appreciate it. But please stop taking out your spite on me. I am here to improve my poetry,not to share kick ass poems.
Re: there's no way out by oneglove	Bhaskaryya 212.162.192.165	22-Dec-04/11:57 PM
Not bad!! But what does AGAINS mean??
Re: a comment on Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	horus8 24.130.62.63	22-Dec-04/11:42 PM
What's classy? Just curious... Raping haikus with your puberty doused ideas about what poetry Means to a 17 year old? Perhaps, straddling over the mouth of Freeverse And pinching a loaf of love? Please, take your mediocrity to the showers. Everyone knows A villanelle is a purposely forced Rhyming couplet, that's the point You tit. My extremely DEEP poem happens to have DEEPER meanings Like Sodomy, war, and biscuits. Good Evening, Sincerely, -=Horus8_Of_The_Eights=-
Re: a comment on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	horus8 24.130.62.63	22-Dec-04/11:15 PM
Retribution, you asswagon.
Re: The Slave by Bhaskaryya	horus8 24.130.62.63	22-Dec-04/11:07 PM
Sounds like that neeger wants a leetle white wheestle.
Re: Andrew part II by Spindle	horus8 24.130.62.63	22-Dec-04/11:03 PM
"Absolute chestnut!!" I could not best this comment, so here it is again. (For some reason every time I read it, I burst).