| Re: a comment on Joanna by DR Limerick |
DR Limerick 213.48.74.38 |
22-Dec-04/2:01 PM |
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No you diken heden you just dont get it do you!!!!!
I iz zee doktor.
know try agen!!
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| Re: Disable by blacksoul |
edpeterson 68.79.0.64 |
22-Dec-04/1:51 PM |
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| Re: a comment on What is that I seek again? by Bhaskaryya |
blacksoul 204.215.33.141 |
22-Dec-04/1:31 PM |
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He also needs to stop giving himself -10- as anonymous if he wants to find out how good his poems are.
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| Re: a comment on I have Learned to Let Go by Joe-joe |
Joe-joe 68.194.47.34 |
22-Dec-04/12:57 PM |
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It really is a shame that you are as sick as you are. You have a gifted mind that could probably accomplish great things if it were properly aimed. I must admit however, that while I do pity you I also find you quite amusing.
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| Re: a comment on I have Learned to Let Go by Joe-joe |
Joe-joe 68.194.47.34 |
22-Dec-04/12:49 PM |
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mmm, give me some time to think about it...I'll get back to you as soon as I decide.
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| Re: Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
blacksoul 204.215.34.34 |
22-Dec-04/12:22 PM |
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Did'nt mean any harm man.
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| Re: Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
jroday 204.215.34.34 |
22-Dec-04/11:58 AM |
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To your comment on my brother poem is about our mother It wasn't meant to be taken that way. It was about our mother trying to raise six kids before she died.
My father is handicapped he has complex Partial Seizures. He just had his second brain surgery in nov.
he was doing fine until the other day,he had another seizure, and now he's in a coma. so I know how you feel, because I told him not to post that shit people
might take it the wrong way. By the way my father is jroday he talk about you and dovina alot he was ya'll
number fan on this site. I will be posting his poems
Felicia
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| Re: a comment on Disable by blacksoul |
jroday 204.215.34.34 |
22-Dec-04/11:33 AM |
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Did'nt mean any harm to no one. my father is handicapped, he's in the hospital in a coma as I speak. again I am sorry.
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| Re: The Slave by Bhaskaryya |
jroday 204.215.34.34 |
22-Dec-04/11:29 AM |
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I agree with Dovina. good poem work on it a little more
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| Re: a comment on Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8 |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
22-Dec-04/11:17 AM |
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I can tell you are 17, you're an idiot.
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| Re: Sidestepping Stupor by PsydewaysTears |
Dovina 17.255.240.138 |
22-Dec-04/10:51 AM |
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At least you're not assuming we know the setting this time. This is good. Verses 5,6 and 7 need some opening transition, I think.
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| Re: The Slave by Bhaskaryya |
Dovina 17.255.240.138 |
22-Dec-04/10:47 AM |
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Good.
Line 2 - "And rest"
Ling 3 - "descending."
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| Re: I have Learned to Let Go by Joe-joe |
Dovina 17.255.240.138 |
22-Dec-04/10:43 AM |
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So your goodbye was not final.
We have two theories here on Poemranker:
1. Poets, who are dim, write nonsense.
2. Poets who are dim write nonsense.
I see -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. adheres to both.
Which do you prefer?
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| Re: a comment on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50 |
22-Dec-04/10:34 AM |
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Whom, and what, do you disagree with?
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| Re: I have Learned to Let Go by Joe-joe |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50 |
22-Dec-04/10:26 AM |
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It's always a time for celebration, the day you finally become housebroken. For what you once thought would suddenly flee, is now under firm command. You've learned to let go, my son. It's a lesson that will stay with you for many years to come, until, of course, you become an elderly. Here's to life, love, and the unpampered pursuit of happiness. Welcome to The Rutherford Club.
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| Re: a comment on Fugitively Speaking by Dovina |
Dovina 17.255.240.138 |
22-Dec-04/10:24 AM |
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Does this mean you will recant and read my poem now and comment on it rather than on how old I am and my general lifetime degree of success and/or failure?
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| Re: a comment on Math Poem by Dovina |
Dovina 17.255.240.138 |
22-Dec-04/10:18 AM |
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Pardon me, but are you speaking to me? Hey, these new red and green lines are very Christmasey, don't you think? Yes, I believe you are. Thank you for identifying me as a bum, and therefore having a bum idea of poetry. As such, I also make macaroni and cheese, and shall, if you request it, use that ability in the writing of a poem. Merry Christmas.
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| Re: Disable by blacksoul |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50 |
22-Dec-04/10:01 AM |
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I found this poeme incredibly hurtful. My mother actually is handicapped, and when I see people like you trivialising something that is a serious problem for many real people, it makes me angry and sad. <no vote>
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| Re: Cool car!! by DR Limerick |
blacksoul 204.215.33.176 |
22-Dec-04/7:28 AM |
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| Re: Twin Forks by auscot |
blacksoul 204.215.33.176 |
22-Dec-04/7:02 AM |
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