titan69
replying on Blobby song$ by MR Blobby
1 Jul 2004, 12:46 PM
what is it you dont get?
Its mr blobby!
go to google s/e and put in mr blobby to see him.
we love you mr blobby!!!!
First, you have to take the cock ring off of your left brain, and relax.
The same way I run in a wheelchair, abstractly.
Thank you for the correction. Often I read far too deep into these things.
cheers
tolstoyleo
replying on An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator by tolstoyleo
1 Jul 2004, 10:33 AM
You would have to definately read the poetry written by "=-dark_angel_= on this site. He has 3 poems in the "worst" section if you didn't know, and most of his poetry is SUPER FUNNY! well... I spent probably 3 hours reading his stuff and was very amazed at the creativity and time spent. Basically. The poem is about taking a shit.
True. But did you read my ode to you?!?
I think you would find the style a little more ... ummm... what's the word I'm looking for... adultish?
Is this your leaving rant?
You over-compliment me. I mean only that I get as much out of this as from most of the other poems I've read here lately.
Absurdly naïve, unforgivably childish and appallingly lewd.
have no clue what its about, tell me
I like the flow, but have
its about a lost love that i dream about from time to time
The category is free verse but I found myself going: ababcc ababcc while readin it.
But... I thought it was alright.
I gave it an 8
I thought this was going to end in "What am I?"
To which I was going to reply: A lizard in the desert
But that didn't happen
At first I thought this was one of those: "What am I?" poems... and I hate those.
"His hobbies a waste of time."
multiple hobbies?
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In its form, the ghazal is a short poem rarely of more than a dozen couplets in the same metre. It always opens with a rhyming couplet called matla. The rhyme of the opening couplet is repeated at the end of second line in each succeeding verse, so that the rhyming pattern may be represented as AA, BA, CA, DA, and so on. In addition to the restriction of rhyme, the ghazal also observes the convention of radif. Radif demands that a portion of the first line -- comprising not more than two or three words -- immediately preceding the rhyme-word at the end, should rhyme with its counterpart in the second line of the opening couplet, and afterwards alternately throughout the poem. The opening couplet of the ghazal is always a representative couplet: it sets the mood and tone of the poem and prepares us for its proper appreciation. The last couplet of the ghazal called makta often includes the pen-name of the poet, and is more personal than general in its tone and intent. Here the poet may express his own state of mind, or describe his religious faith, or pray for his beloved, or indulge in poetic self-praise. The different couplets of the ghazal are not bound by the unity and consistency of thought. Each couplet is a self-sufficient unit, detachable and quotable, generally containing the complete expression of an idea.
How do you swim standing still?
-8-
I just don't get it. Would you please explain it to me?
I gave it a 6. I thought there should be one more "Why?"