sliver
on The Trainspotter by the codeine kid
2 Jun 2004, 3:23 PM
I guess my life isn't that boring then.
I tried to wright a pome when i was pissed as well.
My new favorite. Ten does not begin. I especially like the scroll of life. If you are speaking to God, then your and thee should be capitalized. Fantastic writing.
Good, I don't suppose the angel felt the attraction eh?
Maybe if she'd needed to pack in to the mountains, you know - he could carry her celestial food.
thanks very mutch! Its nice to see somone who reads these
poems for what they are.You will find that narrow minded people
will not understand my stile.im glad to see you did.
How can she be lonely with all these emotional chickens about?
Very well done. I have felt that same feeling, in almost the same circumstances. But not so eloquently.
10
Why ugh ?
Yes i do live near that pub.but i dont go out until morning "hicup"
yes it is a great line iznt it!!!
Starving, sleeping, laying, dying, but not angry. Chickens do only a few things and anger is not one of them. they sleep, fuck, cluck scratch, eat, drink, and shit. You tit.
pain killer
replying on Jimmy and Chichi Choo (Sub-Dylan Bullshit Blues) by the codeine kid
2 Jun 2004, 2:35 PM
i think this is really good shit, but i see already that as a newcomer to this site that there are one or two characters who see it as their duty to run down anyone they see as a threat to their self elected status as kings of the poetry board with their negative put downs..namely horus8 and zodiac and their little crew wibble wibbble honk!!
anyway keep it up codeine...i've read through some of horus8's stuff and he'd give his right nut to write something like this..i haven't had the time or inclination to check out zodiac yet...but i think i'll knowe whati'll find wibble wibble honk honk
You're funny. Let me get this straight; You're mad because I think you're silly for making THE CHICKENS angry? My friend, I will have you know not only does the thought of an actual chicken becoming angry trouble me... but it strikes me as damn comedy! Rooster, certainly, chickens... nah? Try this google horus8 and then google painkiller and then google "angry chickens", and see if you don't surprise yourself too young man, or should I say, lover.
pain killer
replying on Jimmy and Chichi Choo (Sub-Dylan Bullshit Blues) by the codeine kid
2 Jun 2004, 2:30 PM
ah zodiac,...i'm surprised you've managed to find the time to remove your tongue from horus8's hole to comment!
yeh read afew got bored...horus8 psuedo pretentious king/queen of the poemranker poetry board...oh but we are all not worthy...whatever...if it all gives some meaning to his worthless existence then what the hell...horus8..self elected intimidator of those he considers his inferior...okay zodiac...you can kiss his ass again now
I'd like to introduce you to my manager. She's hot, smart, and really great to work with.
Dude, was that you singing? Or did you just mix it all? (Your music that is) Not because I care really, but I must tell you. I was impressed. Very original, funny, and quite different. We could actually tour together, are you interested?