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on Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
22 Apr 2004, 10:35 PM
i feel...embrowned.
excellent fun, this.
is it me, or is this shaped like the midsection of a man with a semi-flaccid erection?
Why add more when you can erase the loner? *heh*
This reminds me of another recent post about the child of death:
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
Some I liked, some I didn't. I like more than not, so it's a 9 fer u
I really like this, actually -10-
Not sure what it means, but I like what I get -8-
Very, very, very, 100% true. I love New York, but as a New Yorker, I have to agree. It's a 10.
I really like your poem. Oooo Ecstasy!
I think this is more of an accusation than a poem
moving and very free form, the way I like it -10-
I don't exactly get the disjunction, maybe it should be a Concrete poem. Otherwise, not bad -8-
Ominous
I love it. I would get rid of the double rocks in the first stanza, and remove one of the coins at the end, probably quarter. very good poem.
Cute
Yes, I agree, you are definitely a dork.
Do you mean "daughter of Satan himself"? Sorry, don't get it.
Do I admit to my ignorance by not knowing who any of those people are? Anyway, what can I say? I wrote that when I was 16....;)
Yes and no. Haha. When I was a kid, I would wake up in the middle of the night and I'd have this super-sensitive feeling all over me, like I couldn't touch anything, but I had to. Weird and hard to explain....I would also hear these voices yelling, but in whispers inside my head. I know I sound psychotic typing this, but yeah. It went away after awhile and then materialized again during my senior high school year in my history class.