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zodiac replying on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 14 Apr 2004, 8:26 PM
If each word were its own line and each line a stanza... it still wouldn't really be a sestina.
Shuushin on Diptych by coffeespoons 14 Apr 2004, 8:23 PM
Help me understand why you consider this a Diptych. Please, I'm not being sarcastic.
Shuushin on The Idea of Fusion at the Beach (After Wallace Stevens) by coffeespoons 14 Apr 2004, 8:17 PM
I'll grant you the ending is Stevensish - I'm reminded more of Thoreau with the rest. And there's not too much bad about that.
Shuushin on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 14 Apr 2004, 7:47 PM
LoL. Brilliant. Leets see, you don't have a nine yet...
Dan garcia-Black on The Idea of Fusion at the Beach (After Wallace Stevens) by coffeespoons 14 Apr 2004, 7:46 PM
"we sound like nothing but the wind" Great thought because that's our job-- to teach the wind to speak.
<Wankster> replying on An Awaited and Long Deserved Spring by <Wankster> 14 Apr 2004, 7:42 PM
The "keeping it inside" is the year keeping spring inside and prolonging winter. I guess you have to live where it's still cold and winter-like in weather during mid-April to understand what it truly means.
Shuushin replying on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 14 Apr 2004, 7:37 PM
yep. Gonna agree with you on this ONE. You aren't making a wonderful first impression...
Shuushin replying on The Queen & The Locksmith by Jeremi B. Handrinos 14 Apr 2004, 7:35 PM
Don't make me give my "sonnets don't have to be iambic pentameter" speech again...
Shuushin replying on Dear Lord by simone_girard 14 Apr 2004, 7:35 PM
Don't make me give my "sonnets don't have to be iambic pentameter" speech again...
Shuushin replying on The Smarts aint Stupids by Shardik 14 Apr 2004, 7:34 PM
Don't make me give my "sonnets don't have to be iambic pentameter" speech again...
Sasha on Dear Lord by simone_girard 14 Apr 2004, 7:32 PM
Not a sonnet.
Sasha on The Smarts aint Stupids by Shardik 14 Apr 2004, 7:32 PM
This is not iambic pentameter, rather amateurish in its construction, and, above all, makes no sense.
Sasha on The Queen & The Locksmith by Jeremi B. Handrinos 14 Apr 2004, 7:30 PM
Not Iambic pentameter. Forced. Inverted, introverted. A bad poem in general
Sasha on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 14 Apr 2004, 7:28 PM
Not a sonnet
Sasha on Unseen Death by Fire_is_cool 14 Apr 2004, 7:19 PM
Show, don't tell
Fire_is_cool replying on Feel the Love by Fire_is_cool 14 Apr 2004, 7:16 PM
Thank you I know it sucks.
Fire_is_cool on Feel the Love by Fire_is_cool 14 Apr 2004, 7:15 PM
Sorry I know that it is really lame but hey so I can't write poetry, but at least I'm not the only one that can't.
edpeterson on My Life by Fire_is_cool 14 Apr 2004, 6:59 PM
umm if you die, does the tunnel grow an end?
edpeterson on Feel the Love by Fire_is_cool 14 Apr 2004, 6:56 PM
HAHAHAHAHA. that is some funny ass bullshit kegparty poetry.
edpeterson on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 14 Apr 2004, 6:51 PM
Fucking hilarious that you chose sestina for the category. AHHAAHHAHHA.