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sk8rs_rule_all on The back of a shovel? by horus8 17 Jan 2004, 6:11 PM
Damn, reminds me of my friend....the sad pathetic yet poetic soul.
horus8 replying on The back of a shovel? by horus8 17 Jan 2004, 6:01 PM
Yes, I always was a quick lay, thanks.
Shuushin on The back of a shovel? by horus8 17 Jan 2004, 5:39 PM
"Then..." I think? good one.
Crakyamuni replying on How rifted by Crakyamuni 17 Jan 2004, 4:57 PM
Physics, taoism, and the merry making of old english 40's. Horus you are a visionary! It's like you know the real me! are you single? Or just rampant? Thanks for the commentary. I hope you enjoy my misspellings and overreacins.
Everyone replying on Outhouse by newagepoet2000 17 Jan 2004, 4:12 PM
[from The Banned Diaries Of Sir Arthur Weatherby-Browne] Alone in the yard, beyond the last of the wilting Azaleas, lies The Outhouse. A place of solitude, and of shame; see how it basks in its filth, taunting me with its soiled bounty. How many loved-ones have fallen there? Swallowed whole by its endless hunger for the browne? I'm wearing pyjamas now. Sieve in hand - the Earth will not claim this treasure! I lower my pants. And lay dung... Trapped in the sieve! Writhing like a worm on a hook! My darling! I carry the beloved filtrate back to the bedchamber, there to bathe it, and clothe it in silk. But kicking and screaming, ever tethered to an old man's beard - that is no life for a crumbling stool! Hands clasped in prayer, and weeping, I watch it ride off in its chariot. Black against the setting sun. Wrapped in a veil.
horus8 replying on Love is Like a Rose by justjay 17 Jan 2004, 3:50 PM
Nay, it's actually a small child doing cherry pickers off of a rusty tank turret in a field somewhere in Bosnia at dusk.
singinkygal replying on knocked down to look up by singinkygal 17 Jan 2004, 2:34 PM
hahaha oh so funny. YOu missed your calling!! A poet with a sense of humor oh well at least you have a sense of humor you can't have it all.
Goad replying on Liberty! by fevriere 17 Jan 2004, 2:09 PM
It's miscategorized, but it's in any case worlds better than most of the shit we have to wade through, so maybe some encouragement is in order?
Shuushin replying on Love is Like a Rose by justjay 17 Jan 2004, 1:36 PM
Actually, I thought it was the twist of a blade and the warmth of blood running down one's wrist, collecting at the elbow, then streaming off.
horus8 on Love is Like a Rose by justjay 17 Jan 2004, 12:28 PM
My friend you have been misinformed we all know love is an exploding american soldier on a tenspeed in the middle of some sand niggered hell hole.
horus8 on knocked down to look up by singinkygal 17 Jan 2004, 12:24 PM
Sure it wasn't knocked up to look down?
horus8 on happy b'day maria by yeats1 17 Jan 2004, 12:24 PM
Yeats huh? Yeah right.
horus8 on How rifted by Crakyamuni 17 Jan 2004, 12:18 PM
Tell me though what were the 'radicals' arranging? Another stupid fucking 7 Eleven for you and your friends to stand in front of after school?
horus8 on How rifted by Crakyamuni 17 Jan 2004, 12:17 PM
The best thing about this poem is your name.
horus8 on Liberty! by fevriere 17 Jan 2004, 12:16 PM
Or do you think that if you keep repeating the word Liberty it will turn into a concrete poem.
horus8 on Liberty! by fevriere 17 Jan 2004, 12:15 PM
Is it shaped like concrete?
Goad on (Come find me) by zodiac 17 Jan 2004, 10:48 AM
I like the first three stanza's quite a lot, but the end doesn't cut it. What are you saying, that the whimsy of a sentient fungus is not just a metaphor and this is a horror poem? Or are you alluding to the effects of poison/hallucinogenic mushrooms -- if so it could be sketched much better. But you taught me a new word, that's pretty rare, lol. Nitpick: no need to say great when in the next line you say colossal.
Goad on Liberty! by fevriere 17 Jan 2004, 10:34 AM
This is an excellent exultation. Hoot'n'holler!
richa on across the lake by baden 17 Jan 2004, 8:08 AM
Seems to flow well bar the last verse. A little unremarkable though - would get a few marks on the dark angel mediocrity scale perhaps.
baden on across the lake by baden 16 Jan 2004, 7:00 PM
inspired by the clearest day ,looking across a lake in nz and dreaming