SupremeDreamer
on lost... by Tineke
18 Dec 2003, 7:54 AM
ok, now if your going to write in self pity.. could you atleast TRY you know ATTEMPT to do it in an artistic and creative fashion or something??
This sounds like a fucking therapy session, or more like a public BOO-HOO-HOO classic cliche teenage "I'm lonely and unloved blah blah"
Fuck.. get a journal. And your from belgium? This might be the stupidest joke ever concieved and carried out, really now.
Whats next? The infamous internet suicide note?
DRUGS
DRUGS
DRUGS
DRUGS
so beautifull, there is a guy that i love far away from me. It is hard...
Tineke
DRUGS
Brutal and exact. very nice. 9
I only noticed because I have to correct my own spelling constantly, usin this keyboard like the twitchin drunkard down on beer fume alley. My spelling has improved, but my lousy finger coordination makes that fact completely irrelevant.
Even misspelled harlot once.. then again I've done worse- cept thats the only damn thing that still bothers me at night.
Thank you dreamer. I fixed it. AAHHH
They new at youth- "knew"?
you know, this piece would be perfect with linebreaks- it would, but I'm not one to fidget, its good either way. 10.
What a masterpiece! You really handle things in mind for this! :-)
Princess_Snowflake
on "nos-f***ing-talgia": a crappy unrhymed sonnet by chicken
17 Dec 2003, 8:29 PM
Very poetic!
Lovely.. I love it. 10! oh wait, I forgot to give my blessing!
oh well.
Ohh. I'm devastated.
One: the struggle had nothing to do with mankind, it had to do with ME.
But obviously you missed that while skimming through my writing and cooking up some insulting comment.
And how nice, again you mentioned intelligence- as if calling me a moron a thousand times accomplishes anything.
Fuck mankind. You missed the goddamn point entirely you twit. Why don't you try swinging in the air somewhere else?
I spend time being original with my poetry.. my voting line? can grow old and dusty, I couldn't give a shit.
Plus anyway, I make other interesting "original" and creative comments all over the place. Haven't you heard? I'm the commentary clown with ONE overused "blessed with blur blah" line, with a thousand personalities spinning through the keyboard at the same time?
Or perhaps you don't know about my other escapades.. but whatever.
winter as a loss of reason - love it.
'erhaps if you'd pause for a moment and quit blowing bubbles out your father's corn pipe, you'd notice that a penis is no place for your to starch your bow tie.
lol.