horus8
replying on Awefucked by a Shushin Shitzu (freefuck) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
8 Nov 2003, 6:57 PM
You would be honored if a piece of toast gummed itself to death with a newpaper and coffee; you fucking semi colon; toting colon.
Well, thats why i asked for help. :/
The other title wont do:
He was a swimmer, and he didn't like boats.
how about " five Rhyming reasons why peach pie reminds me of your buried corpse".?
My title suggestion would be "Any title but that one" . Or "Whatever happened to Viking Burials".
I just couldnt resist.. plus today I didn't feel like making a sonnet- I've become addicted to the vilanelle.
polyamorist isnt in my dictionary.. exactly what does it mean?
Aside from that, I bless you with 7.
Pity the trees that stoop- 10.
I said that once, but then I got a nine inch nail in me bumcheeck and quickly got up.
Last Days become another Beginning, and fate was written with a pencil- get yourself JesusCream - White Out Made To Erase Sin!! (Gods Pen belongs to me, sorry-I stole that and his Buddha Joint)
heres a 6.
Hide? Grow nut hair and give her a kiss already.
Blessed with 4.
A girlie gave him a lil hug'n'kiss, and he found out that he wasnt evil, just seriously loaded on the 120 proof Denial&Sour-Grape Vermouth.
Some gremlins still have a fur coat in their secret closet.
The memory this brings would warrent me to sing as I remember a pair of gay pants. In a van they were found on top of a mound of other people's stuff. Indeed they had GAIDS but the owner was swayed not to believe anyone. Try as we could to show him he should go and retrieve his gay pants. All he did was rebuff the accusation of his stuff, and refused to move 'his' gay pants. No more could we take, for Jesu's sake, these infernal gay pants. We cast them asunder but this was a blunder as they spread the disease around.
Good form and attention to structure, but cliche imagery.
Quit sniffling! What kind of satanist are you? How can you be proper and evil wearing that cockerspaniel hat and a pink tutu?
Are you trying to say something?
Nice turn
I sometimes walk up the highest peak of a mountain and throw myself off.
Then I realise mountains are not usually shear faces and just roll down.
four lines in I had no idea.
a bit dull
a baby devouring a disease inside his mother, a morbid violence, poetry!
thick things don't flow
and where did the rose come from