newdawnfades
replying on A Fractured Egg Shell by newdawnfades
30 Oct 2003, 8:51 PM
I didn't think what I said was out of line. I was just trying to be friendly. Could it be possible you are being a tad bit sensitive? Anyhow, life's too short, you're not the joking type, dully noted.
Suicide is no option. Think before you stink.
White Jade, Red Jade or Purple Jade?
Well then, we need more buckleheads like you. Peace out, dawg!!!
This poem is to american poetry what farming is to terrorism.
It was so cute in those days when you were just poor little Ranger â the little brit popper that couldnât.
China is Reddish yellow.
My buckle reflects only the truth.
Hard hittin' street poetry if there ever was hard hittin' street poetry.
Decent idea presented in rather generic fashion.
It's a nice poem, but it leaves me wanting punctuation or breaks, something.
you also have a thing for bleeding and chests.
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you hav a thing with the word glossy.
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good
but generic
still good.
wat about the bottle rockets?
gizard on a skilet,
yummmmmmm.
Jeez, aren't we forward? hehe
Maybe nentwined's dad would make one.