Shuushin
on Billy and the voices by SupremeDreamer
12 Oct 2003, 7:18 PM
[clap clap clap]
"oooo"
courage the cowardly dog?...
i think you totally lost your marbles miss...
its like that scene in The Patriot where the battleship explodes and the court lady claps, laughing, saying she enjoys the fireworks.
I like this poem. It also almost reminds me of that one cartoon "Courage the Cowardly Dog". I mean that in a good way! I give you a 10!
From where can I obtain an application form?
This is the best poem about a pipecleaner I have ever seen. I especially like the way you use "inner thighs" to represent the main chute of the pipe, and the burning coffee for the tobacco.
I find the common "stink cunt" to be a lovely alternative to the common bacteria ridden sandpaper cock.
Right now? We're wishing you had a friend too. It would spare us the trouble of foraging through your rubbish for a reason. A reason to why and how you've made it this far without losing a limb or accidentilly blaming the world for your stupidity. unless you have, then naturally, I apologize.
One should kill randomly without personal ties to the victim. Otherwise, it's just another lame boring crime of jealous genitalia.
An m-100 makes more of a pro harvest statement.
Yes, that's the way it is with 'them lambs' So when they go baah? You really shouldn't be shocked... That's what they do.
I think this is super super funny. LOL Full 9
I find homosexuality to be a splendid substitute to the common stink cunt. On the other hand, I found heterosexuality to be a flashy way to procreate and feel like you've really contributed something to this spinning mound of colonizing bacteria we call the human experience on earth. I think in the end, yes, I'd much rather scrape a pipe than scrape a cervex or a perneum, any day.
Poems are words that are from our imagination, some are more towards reality and some are from a whole different planet. This poem isn't exactly true to life but it captured my attention and emotions. Good job!
The poem is good. Reading it just made me wanna cry. It hits home for many people
I really enjoyed how you capitalized Certain words for emphasis in your poem. I found it mildly original, and passively Bold.
very heart-felt poem. I love how the words don't ryhme but the poems still flows.
it's the truth. america has issues. hell all of the earth has issues.
Touching - the ending is very sweet and unforced; well done.
it's best not to talk to one's self while writing or soemthing like this comes up
that's becuase I was talking to myself when I wrote it.