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Artemis745 on standing on the dry weeds by silvertongueddevil 11 Oct 2003, 10:41 AM
Like the fact that there is no capitalization. However, I think that if you are not going to have any of that then you should also leave out punctuation. Just my opinion though.
Artemis745 on Snow Storm by tsolantzr 11 Oct 2003, 10:40 AM
The last line does not fit the rest of the poem very well. A little work on it and this poem would be fairly good.
Artemis745 replying on Die by Artemis745 11 Oct 2003, 10:32 AM
My poetry is my poetry. I only write when I have a really strong emotion that I am having problems dealing with, many times it will give me depressing poems. I refuse to change my poems just because of the fact that they are all along the same emotion.
Artemis745 replying on My Angel's Suicide by Artemis745 11 Oct 2003, 10:29 AM
I agree. However, this is a poem and it isn't really true to life. It's fantasy. That is what makes it enjoyable.
sliver on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 11 Oct 2003, 8:12 AM
I give you another 10 on this most excellent piece, So that my ink driddles might drop below it where they rightfully belong. This one should always be in the #1
peaceseeker on Therapy by http://bandgeek 11 Oct 2003, 7:03 AM
A beautiful account of sympathy sex gone wild.›
?-Dave_Mysterious-? replying on Where are my Spectacles? by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 11 Oct 2003, 6:57 AM
How appropriate, you fight like a cow.
Shuushin on XYZ by crwncka1 11 Oct 2003, 5:47 AM
It has a nice sincere feel to it; works for me. and "wishing into the wind" is nice - but I'm a sucker for alliteration with W's
Shuushin on one by crwncka1 11 Oct 2003, 5:44 AM
first, change "pedal" to "petal" then delete the second stanza entirely.
Shuushin on Die by Artemis745 11 Oct 2003, 5:37 AM
... and not a drop to drink. I like it - I would like it more if the word "almost" killed itself. maybe replace it with another modifier. like "gentle", or sumfin.
Shuushin on Silent Tears by Artemis745 11 Oct 2003, 5:34 AM
I think this would be particularly good as a character outline - I feel a story coming on.
Shuushin on My Angel's Suicide by Artemis745 11 Oct 2003, 5:32 AM
"In perfect position." Everything about angels is perfection - glad you had that word there. I didn't notice the repetition with "the gun" as I read it, which is cool.
Shuushin on "I know what you need!" by A. Nomaly 11 Oct 2003, 5:25 AM
no.... no - NOT THE SWANS!
Shuushin on For W. by A. Nomaly 11 Oct 2003, 5:23 AM
woah.
Shuushin on NUMERO UNO by gorbichoff 11 Oct 2003, 5:19 AM
"I'm just a cracka flowin', not really knowin'," YOU SHALL HAVE YOUR BIG ONE ZERO!
Shuushin on Magnets & Cross-Eyed Children by Bachus 11 Oct 2003, 5:18 AM
Puts the physics back in metaphysical - I really like the sounds made by "you will never deserve" ... / "of farulous verve"
nentwined replying on Birth by nentwined 11 Oct 2003, 4:27 AM
test4
gorbichoff on The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom 10 Oct 2003, 11:15 PM
that's definitely 10 material, definitely
gorbichoff on The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom 10 Oct 2003, 11:15 PM
that's definitely 10 material, definitely
Bachus on "I know what you need!" by A. Nomaly 10 Oct 2003, 9:37 PM
Touchinng the bottom of a lake with bare feet is the grossest thought imaginable.