Crakyamuni
on Picasso: A Painters Revenge by SupremeDreamer
28 Aug 2003, 11:57 AM
This reads like an 8th grade childs diary.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on The Mellifluous Sound of God: Musical Eden by Don-Quixote
28 Aug 2003, 11:55 AM
Extraordinarily pretentious title, even by your dictionary-obsessed standards. Nevertheless, great use of "delivered via the ear to be absorbed by my brain" as a beautifully concise synonym for "hearing something".
"exquisite melancholy of the supernatural" / 10
Was it the love perhaps? Love of death and mortality?
Or maybe tits?
knowing is insignificant.
I suggest that you not post poetry on this site if you aren't prepared to hear what people think of it.
but that ain't what it takes... to love me.
No, I was an unclasped necklace.
Did you call abdulla over to make those witty comments and to provide those amusing votes? I mean, i know its all meant to piss me off, but i actually laughed. thanks for the free comedy act, i mean really.
-shrug- so you didnt like em. no loss. enjoy the rest of your day. :)
Couldnt you just be more, you know, not so uptight? jeez.
Laughing would have been better.. telling me im a little shit who cant write would be funny.. but:
"fuck you "dude".. well now cmon, that doesnt even cause me to feel any emotion what so ever.. i think your losing your touch..
here, lets sum this up with an overused quote:
"life passes most people by"
pfft. 0
... _sigh_ ... cmon now, this is one big cliche scrawled to torture me eyes...
2
... well, atleast the title was good.. but the poem severly disappointed me.. you didnt do your title justice.. luring me to read this wasnt cute, or a good joke.. bleh
4.
you know, i really dont want you mentioning what you consider the breakfast of champions, it reveals why ive always been repulsed by your breath.. poop sticks arent that good for the olfactory senses of other people.. mouthwash isnt expensive, but perhaps you would like me to donate 10 dollars into the "save King Abdullahs breath foundation" ?
it would be a worthy investment i think anyway. :)
so?
Don-Quixote
replying on The Mellifluous Sound of God: Musical Eden by Don-Quixote
28 Aug 2003, 10:28 AM
Whoa? -shrug- just drugs man, just drugs, dont you know about them needles, joints, and lovely multi-colored pills? :P
Um, no it isnt. :)
RUBBISH
Poopy on a stick would be more entertaining, you hopeless turd.
Whoa dude man that's like so you know just awesome like whoa
Just one of those days. (7)