poetandknowit
on Club by Beseech
30 Jul 2003, 3:02 PM
Love the word chitchat (I think it is one word), but the rest of the poem is rather trite. You need many more beers before you can write about bars with any meaning. Quit doing ecstasy; it is bad for you.
I love this poem. Such a pleasure to read again on a cloudy day in Misery.
Interesting at best.
Actually, what interests me, is how many hits this poem has received due to its title. Things like that just fascinate the hell into me.
thanks, my dark secret.
jump in on this one, h:
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It's a shame you're the only competition this sight has to offer, and a dark secret relief.
You should quote me where applicable, (as in the whole poem since I wrote it) because otherwise, you're such a talentless cad, you can't even plagiarise my comments with out saturating it all in your own homosexual jealous straight edge BORING tantrumesque piddle. Good work 10!
a might touchy today, eh 195.157.153.253?
Wowzers. You seem so harmless on the outside. But deep down you're a seething cauldron of rage. A turbulent cess pool of corruption. Kids better stay away from you because you're dangerous. Dangerous to the max. And dark. And mysterious. You're OuT oF coNtROl, man. You're way beyond the extreme. You're special. Yeah. Right.
For fuck's sake woman. I knew it was only going to be a matter of time before some dullard told hate-boy here about American History X. My mind contains your mind.
first seven and last five lines are a bit ungamely
the rest is fine
Very funny. "Plight" doesn't belong somehow, but the end makes up for it. I LOL, really I did.
Great poem, love the personification of faith, and the hand towels. You're a genius when you wanna, a poet always. Kisses.
Too late! thats how it always is
hey now it makes sense!
cad, this cuts.
it's not supposed to be this way.
Well simple then! hugh what are you doing back on poemranker anywho - you really must be bored!
one of my friends, the mother of the chocolate kid, found the body. i tried to write it from her POV.
funny