Shardik
replying on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer
6 Jul 2003, 6:12 PM
I like it so far, don't be critical, it makes me blush.
Than who might you be?
Daddy, oh sweet dear daddy.
I love making myself laugh.
No :( And I'm starting to hate this shit.
Why is that whenever I look at a poem and go back and change something it fucks everything to hell?
*Edits (again)*
Are you missing a stanza purposely?
Spew?... dont make me carve out another insect grave.
What good is a keyboard? If it spills such spew...3
... this isnt worth 5.. here: 0 ;) did i forget the 1?
burp...10
looks like someone burped.. 5
OnceI turned a pen into Mia Farrow
I know, cmon man, i still remember making a PIPE out of a pen in highschool. ;P
ah.. damn me eyes to hell.. i need better glasses.. this sucks, im 17 and i got the eyesight of a 70 year old. yeah, i notice that specific line of details. ok, well dead squirrells.. cmon man they are cute lil mammals.. ah well. i feel stupid ;/
"What good is a pen, if one knows not how to write?"
I've used pens for a lot of things other than writing.
Whistles to weapons the possiblities never end.
No. Just timely. :)
I like this the best out of the series. Keep going by all means.
Ah, yo're quick today.
The squirrel died my friend, the dog was on it's carcass chewing. Revenge for hours of torment. Read between the lines. The dog can't be on something if it's dead, now can it?
He shot the squirrel not the dog.