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thepinkbunnyofdoom on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america 6 Jul 2003, 10:15 PM

Indeed. Well said. A story well told, as only a slightly seasoned truth can be. -10-

Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service) by thepinkbunnyofdoom 6 Jul 2003, 9:14 PM

Oh, well... I see. Good, well, as for a title it reminded me of the table where they feed you when you're filming a movie on location or at the studio, full of all kinds of naughty goodies. Carry on then, nice poem.

Jeremi B. Handrinos on To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service) by thepinkbunnyofdoom 6 Jul 2003, 9:11 PM

I would call it "Craft's Service" and try not to hang out there through the course of the shoot. (movie lingo)

Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on The Garden Island by Jeremi B. Handrinos 6 Jul 2003, 9:09 PM

It was just the pinapple top, my young crusader, but there are some ants in Africa that can do that, if you're sleeping or drunk, of course.

Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos 6 Jul 2003, 9:07 PM

Thank you, I just may.

Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos 6 Jul 2003, 9:06 PM

I'm flattered, thank you.

thepinkbunnyofdoom on The Zen of the Pen by DreamerSupreme 6 Jul 2003, 8:47 PM

Very thought provoking. -9-. Even though you ryhmed zen with pen.

thepinkbunnyofdoom on vacation by geewhiz1962 6 Jul 2003, 8:42 PM

Please lie and tell me you put no effort into this(cause I already belive you). Its too short and reads very dry. Read the Queen and the Locksmith by Jeremi B. Handrinos. Same Idea(sorta, I think but its hard to tell with Horus8), much better done.

thepinkbunnyofdoom on Ocular Photoalbum by DreamerSupreme 6 Jul 2003, 8:36 PM

I like the way you gently tap on the emotional heart string here. Very nice poem. -8-

thepinkbunnyofdoom on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer 6 Jul 2003, 8:32 PM

The best vilanelle I have ever read(which true isn't many but eh?)!!!! -10-.

thepinkbunnyofdoom on The Garden Island by Jeremi B. Handrinos 6 Jul 2003, 8:25 PM

I love the Idea of Ants carrying some one completely off. -9-

thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service) by thepinkbunnyofdoom 6 Jul 2003, 8:21 PM

I have been for awhile. I've merely been working on style up to this point.

thepinkbunnyofdoom on The Queen & The Locksmith by Jeremi B. Handrinos 6 Jul 2003, 8:16 PM

Wow. I understand it, and yet I don't. Confusing to say the least, but I'm quite impressed. -10-

Jeremi B. Handrinos on To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service) by thepinkbunnyofdoom 6 Jul 2003, 8:13 PM

When did you all of a sudden get crafty?

Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer 6 Jul 2003, 8:12 PM

The title's a barrell of monkeys.

Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on The Queen & The Locksmith by Jeremi B. Handrinos 6 Jul 2003, 8:01 PM

Now does it do it for you?

Jeremi B. Handrinos on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer 6 Jul 2003, 7:09 PM

You're improving at these. Steady as she goes.

Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on At a hotel room in Royal Oak by horus8 6 Jul 2003, 6:35 PM

I just did, it took mr. pig in the jump suit.

dmzoacan on At a hotel room in Royal Oak by horus8 6 Jul 2003, 6:32 PM

oh good god no I bet he drank the check too 10 Why don't you give me 10s anymore?? What's with this 9 bullshit?? Stop toying with me. I'm not a toy.

Shardik on vacation by geewhiz1962 6 Jul 2003, 6:14 PM

You act as if you've been moonlighting as a poet, and are just exhausted... Poor dear.