A little tungsten in cheek, no?

i like that..i give it a 10....it made me laugh...alot...

If you punctuated your I's and and grammarically scrutinized over an edit you'd, I believe, get the marks that this deserves.

Also... Three dots are better than 4.

Nicely done, did you know that I was the first person on this site to group together sets of haikus to tell a broader story? Now you do. My only red mark would be "The prettiest one, Everyone meets in their life, That captures them so." Using one right before everyone? And then again later, unless your title was "one" then it might work, but not here. Change second stanza's "one" into a stronger none, or verb, such as nymph, thing, love, girl, can, upholestry, get my drift? Otherwise 8. Now leave me alone.

Haiku (freeverse) by bike In this poem? You represent god. Could you tell?

I'm changing my 2 to a 7, because you deserve better here. You've paid your dues, and this piece stood its ground, and it still does. I would make it an 8, but I hate tylenol, because my cousin died of Ryan's syndrome.

I think you could do without the last two lines

are you john? or is there another john we don't know about

I especially like the final stanza, nice job -9-