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replying on "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus
10 Jun 2003, 1:01 PM
Yes, and when he hands him the mint and flees, leaping for cover, like he's in a war? Riveting.
Thank you, and congratulations on your haiku success by the way.
I interpret a homerun of shit! Good, very good, very very good. They way you rhymed ass with class and thrill with kill... Stunning, and inventive, and a swim in brain juice? Wow, that's deep.
So.
Yes I know I boobed Robert, I can do the 5-7-5 but these thoughts sometimes appear in the middle of the night and you know I write them down because I like them but your right, its not quite the baked Alaska is it?
I am sorry, would you believe one of my Haikus was inspired by you? I can tell which one did if you like.
Your friend
Laurence
Robert,
I hope they use kerosene or this senryu's useless. I'm pretty sure they do but if you find out please let me know as you wouldn't have thought that for no reason.
I'm glad you got the jist.
Wow says a hell of a lot and makes you feel kinda angry at those exxon duders. 9
piss out
I feel stupefied by the uncertainity of your remarkable pee-sized jibe! but thats just me.
The title "perversions" is very fitting.
that was odd... quite odd indeed...
love sucks.
ha i like this
tender sweet and mild reminds me of "Silent Night"
the part about bones being "no longer supple" sounded weird to me... just cause bones arent really supposed to be...
'Get it ready, will you?' was the answer, uttered so savagely that I started. The tone in which the words were said revealed a genuine bad nature. I no longer felt inclined to call Heathcliff a capital fellow.