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INTRANSIT on wish by daniella 5 Jun 2003, 7:33 AM
sweet. Suite! SU-WEET!
INTRANSIT on Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw 5 Jun 2003, 7:27 AM
No. He's a 600 cubic inch supercharged JP-4 injected Hemi powered steamroller with rubber edged drive wheel. And if you get in his way, well that's your own damn fault.
INTRANSIT on Taliban Ambush by scitz 5 Jun 2003, 7:21 AM
dingdingdingding!! We have a winner!!!
INTRANSIT on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig 5 Jun 2003, 7:20 AM
there are no words.....
spank me baby yeah on Her Galactic Boudoir, his make-work by Bachus 5 Jun 2003, 5:13 AM
lol. 9
spank me baby yeah on The boy by geewhiz1962 5 Jun 2003, 5:09 AM
I compare thee to the contents of a diaper 3
spank me baby yeah on suppose (a warm sun) by richa 5 Jun 2003, 5:09 AM
I basked in your poem 8
daniella on dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined 4 Jun 2003, 11:06 PM
you have got something going on here mirrored in other verses i have seen of yours. good going. am out of here.. spent!
daniella on fragment by nentwined 4 Jun 2003, 11:03 PM
trim the cadence by breaking these lines in half at the beat point..... or not
daniella on what little I know by nentwined 4 Jun 2003, 10:59 PM
complex issues well beyond our ken
nentwined replying on Iterated Fuck by nentwined 4 Jun 2003, 10:57 PM
nope. wrote it all by hand. perseverence. ;)
daniella on with no words to write (v2) by nentwined 4 Jun 2003, 10:52 PM
huh?
daniella on Iterated Fuck by nentwined 4 Jun 2003, 10:45 PM
did you use a dictaphone for this baby?
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Her Galactic Boudoir, his make-work by Bachus 4 Jun 2003, 10:30 PM
I'm not saying anything. I'm just uttering random phrases to see what happens.
daniella on Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4 Jun 2003, 10:11 PM
go figure
nentwined on The boy by geewhiz1962 4 Jun 2003, 10:10 PM
"a heir" -> "an heir" You might try getting someone to read this aloud to you, and pick out where the flow seems off. (I stumbled all over the place; nearly broke an 'ankle'). And I'm not all too into the "I must capitalize the first word of every line and put a period at the end". It doesn't "go with the flow" for me. Lots of sentences arbitrarily chopped...
daniella on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4 Jun 2003, 9:58 PM
miscreant, a powdered white hairpiece behooves you on this, a momentous occasion
daniella on Blade by Blade 4 Jun 2003, 9:49 PM
is this a rhetorical question?
Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on Theology by dougsoderstrom 4 Jun 2003, 9:46 PM
I'm sorry, I just had to let you know, that this comment made me chirp out loud. NOW FOR A TASTELESS PLUG! http://www.garageband.com/genre/raprock that's me on the bottom of the page, tell my mom!
daniella replying on My Friend? by Blade 4 Jun 2003, 9:46 PM
indeed you saucy reeling-ripe nut-hook