Bill Z Bub
on John Denver's hang-glider by horus8
19 May 2003, 4:06 PM
Great stuff.
"All fine examples of secret movement."
Here's a tenner. Don't spend it all in one place.
Yes, copyright it, because I'm sure someone is just dying to steal it away and use it for their own lack of writing ability. Good luck with your writing.
"it's all in the past." Would kick out the bottom if it was " and the whole thing was that" or only that, or just that. I loved it all the way until that.
Vilanelle
A Villanelle: "is 19 lines long, but only uses two rhymes, while also repeating two lines throughout the poem. The first five stanzas are triplets, and the last stanza is a quatrain such that the rhyme scheme is as follows: "aba aba aba aba aba abaa." The tricky part is that the 1st and 3rd lines from the first stanza are alternately repeated such that the 1st line becomes the last line in the second stanza, and the 3rd line becomes the last line in the third stanza. The last two lines of the poem are lines 1 and 3 respectively, making a rhymed couplet." --.
I pray this helps the 'ism' of your beak. If not. Oh, well.
Yardbird
replying on If this isn't plagiarism I don't know what is... by Yardbird
19 May 2003, 2:35 PM
And 'bum-arse'? Come on, that's just childish...
Yardbird
replying on If this isn't plagiarism I don't know what is... by Yardbird
19 May 2003, 2:34 PM
Oh dear, it gets worse...
What will you come up with next - 'I know you are, you said you are, but what am I'? Grow up, for shit's sake!
Yardbird
replying on If this isn't plagiarism I don't know what is... by Yardbird
19 May 2003, 2:32 PM
This coming from a gimp who things that in writing a poem called "porn star haikus", he's being 'shocking', 'funny' and 'controversial'. Piss off, you sad, aimless bastard.
it's great, and all, but I don't quite see how the repeated lines fit in with the pairs of lines before their repetitions; it seems they're only repeated for the sake of the form of the poem.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on If this isn't plagiarism I don't know what is... by Yardbird
19 May 2003, 12:47 PM
You forgot 'horus g8'.
L.O.L.
Well that was a waste of web space. What do Bill z. bub. Dark fandago, and Yardturd have in common one might ask? That's easy. The need to reach deep down into eachothers soles for comfort, and belonging, to anything, especially. this lovely site "poemfaker".con
Young, but well on it's way. Ted Nugit sucks buffallo balls. you might consider changing your name.
Haven't you noticed that no poeme on this site ever has an average of x when all of its votes are equal to x (unless x is 5)?
Oops! I meant GAUZE, not gauss. Gauss is a german mathematician. Gauze is a thin transparent fabric with a loose weave.
I wish I knew her reasoning too.
Diarrhoea (Sonnet) by Felchpoet
Diarrhoea has set on another day
Diarrhoea has arrived, leaving no thong (unsoiled)
Diarrhoea so wet, it comes out as spray
Diarrhoea so brown, staining everything
The brown hole has blown my guts out
The brown hole drips on my tights
The brown hole leaks from within
The brown hole, I can't stop the shite
The void in my bum has widened
The void adds to my ablution
The void has continuously brownened
The diarrhoea has taken me over
Spraying the weight of the world from my bum.
I'm bringing the answer to your question over here. No.
My am/fm in the truck doesn't work. Traditionally, Rock, Rap I've recently become hooked on jazz and my favorite classical piece thus far is The 1812 Overature by Tchaikovsky and the New York Philharmonic.
But I seem to have The Crash test dummies on my mind lately. Gawd. Paki's right. I am a goof. It's good to be a goof. later.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on If this isn't plagiarism I don't know what is... by Yardbird
19 May 2003, 6:42 AM
hahahaha you complete bum-arse. You saw that you'd made an utter bosh and desperately tried to save face by claiming it was deliberate. Well guess what kiddo - you ain't foolin' no one. Now scram!
THIS IS SHIT. 0.
Not nearly enough pretense, slather on the icing,man. I'm glad I gave this overnight cause I'm reading it better and noticed the changes. Um, are you sure on (gauss). I looked it up and it doesn't seem to jive. I don't want to say what I see, but I wish I knew her reasoning.