babyBOOMER
on A true love by prettykristah
18 Mar 2003, 7:51 PM
Absolutely beautiful! I'm not much into rhyming, but this flowed so well. I feel the pain of your loss here, and was truly touched by your wrods.
Thanks for sharing so much of what you feel.
Thom
I haven't missed you at all.
Why are you butting in? Yes, I like him tits, dick and all. You know nothing of our dynamic or of what has been going on. It doesn't concern you, period. And by the way, my name is Tanya, not Ornella. I am not bi-polar and even if I was then I don't really think it's something you should be making fun of.
This is really Wierd and somewhat Sad. Feel's like you have some really dangerous emotions in you heart. Thanks for reading my poems. I never really worked hard on them as I should. I will try on my next poem.
Excellent, and amusing, I'm giving you ten for making me smile.
Crap i meant "or as"i always do that
Corporate america sucks, of as horus would say laggniappe
Here it is,
Submerged in endless (trailing off)
I watch them fade by (sigh)
Lifeless and Stone-faced (paining on)
I see...
The face I use to be
They want to feel this (straining on)
They want to sense this (now)
Drunk with existence (waking me)
I'll show you something (someone) you can feel
This poem reminds me of a Project 86 song in the way it is put together. Nice job horus, whats with the 8 in your name anyways?
um..hmm
The whole baby oil thing sounds a little wierd but works. Could have used a little more backround on the charecter maybe
Strange and obscene
Can we put Zoloft in the Jello. sis? please.
Hi Tanya! How are you?!?! I missed you sooo much! Anyway, I just dropped by to let you know about the wonderful invention called "ELECTRONIC MAIL", or "E-MAIL", if you will. With this so-called "ELECTRONIC MAIL", one can transmit text-based messages to another person without forcing 3000 other people to scroll past your latest anus magnus! PLEASE USE IT BECAUSE YOU ARE RATHER BORING TA CHEERIO PIP DIDDLY FUCK
"I like you for you" hahahahahahahahahahahaha......hahahahaha hahahahahahahahahaha!!!
Welcome to MS. ORNELLA'S NEIGHBORHOOD
Hi kids, its a wonderful day in the neighborhood! Can you say Co-Dee-Pen-Dent? Sure... I knew you could!
Follow me into the kitchen children, be careful, don't slip on that pool of venom I threw-up earlier. Now let's open the drawer and I'll show my collection of daggers. Oh! this one's my favorite kids! It's the one I use for stabbing people in the back.
Can you say Change-ling? How about Shape-shifter? Today we're going to take a trip to zoo and visit the Bi-polar bears. Won't that be fun?! They're going to teach use how to vacillate between hospitable & homicidal. Then the witch from Hansel & Gretel will be here to show us how to lure addictive personalities with alchohol and pills.
While we're still here in the kitchen, I'd like to show you a recipe from my new cook book;
It's a Wonderful Day for A Neighbor.
Take one lost soul, baste him in merlot, season with crushed up vicodens. Batter with relentless abuse, fuck him over a hot stove, then drag through burning coals.
Repeat.
Always remember kiddies, I like you just the way you are. Tits, dick and all!
mon amie mon contre ami mon amie mon contre amie
How strange. I haven't seen this til now. I feel that if your Therody and my Underseas came to life and met they would wed and give birth to a thousand pisciform children. Slippery ominess children. Then you and I would be forced to go out in our tiny boat, cast our nets, and draw back all our weird abundance before it devoured everything in its path.
Awesome, could be better if u dropped the last para tho. And changed "pillow" to somthing else
roll again, please
Cool
Cool thanx