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on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap
13 Mar 2003, 7:46 PM
doing his master's bidding,
middenHeap's into the fray.
oy vey!
I suppose -that- no one really could
--will help the meter
When she over her cradle cooed
--i know what you mean, but it reads awkwardly
nice effort. excellent topic for a V. the grief-struck often do repeat and repeat, to force themselves to accept. very nice tie-in, there.
You are a moron. FYI.
You are a moron. FYI.
Excellent snazziness.
Thats the point govnah
This poem is cool, it's exactly the same if you read it backwards as when you read it frontwards.
How'd you do that?
Most excellent limerickizationalism.
Holy shit, I remember reading about that in the paper!!!! That was YOU?!?
What happened to the girl? did she end up dropping the charges? There was a rumor going around that you worked out some sort of deal with her where she dropped the charges and you let her keep the goat.
I know how you feel, elizabethann. I used to have serious issues with my body, but now I'm beginning to accept myself for who I am. In case you didn't know, I'm disabled. It can be a problem at times, but there are very few bodily maneuvers that cannot be achieved with some sort of harness, a small tub of vaseline, a pair of binoculars and a basketful of self-esteem. And another basket. And a goat.
Unfortunately, such maneuvers include the sequence of hideous contortions required to operate a sander using only my groin. I tried this once and was very seriously injured.
Yes! Friend o' the Devil is a friend of mine. If i gert home before daylight i just might get some sleep tonight hight... Got a wife in Chino... 9.
I've never written anything about curry, or shit. Wrong guy. Thanks for the seven though. i think you are thinking of darkangel.
i'm giving it a nine, even if it's to him.
I believe you've outdone yourself. Have a FWOT.
i really liked this, the imagery is fantastic
Sounds like the ocean, love it !
By the way that Saturn ring thing you wrote for your wife....it partly inspired me to write one i posted today, like your true comment...'bloody war of angels',
think you need to work on last line, its okay but you dont do okay you do bravo. 7
Icarus flies like an irish kite. Glad to see non conformity, anorak poetry fucks me off occasionally infact conformist is icarus poetry, down with it.
God your horny tonight, ice the red I'm coming over.
lol. ok. well i wasn't aware that it was an attempt at self-loving, but ok. oh and i do have issues about my body. but then again, i've never met anyone who doesn't. and the unpretty song is good - in my opinion. maybe that explains it, right?
I'M SPEECHLESS, THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME, AND YEAH GODS BORING BRING ON THE EVIL MEISTER.