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Freethinker1602 replying on Shouldn't have said anything(please critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642 9 Mar 2003, 9:17 AM
wow razor...you sure know how to make ppl feel better. Maybe you should try to jump that tiger shark, I mean after all it is no match for your over inflated cranium and unrivaled ego.
Freethinker1602 on I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) by TrulyUnique0642 9 Mar 2003, 9:15 AM
Hey look I liked it and gave it the 10. I was mearly saying that pain is not as great when you live in anger. Anger leaves less room for pain.
INTRANSIT replying on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub 9 Mar 2003, 8:18 AM
Sorry 'bout that Mr. B. I must've logged off just before you logged on or sumpn. The trky addr is correct. We'll chat about my poem as well.
Bill Z Bub replying on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub 9 Mar 2003, 7:35 AM
I REPENT! I REPENT DEAR JESU! I'LL NEVER WRITE A POEM ABOUT A HOMELESS ALCOHOL CHALLENGED MALE AGAIN. Glub!
Bill Z Bub replying on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub 9 Mar 2003, 7:20 AM
FOR JESU'S SAKE, MAN, WHAT HAVE I DONE TO OFFEND THEE! PLEASE TELL ME NOW, OR I'LL BE DISTRACTED ALL DAY LONG! You evil, evil, man.
Bill Z Bub on One More Mile by marvelis 9 Mar 2003, 7:17 AM
I liked the last two lines. (Gosh, I'm such a positive thinker!)
Bill Z Bub replying on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub 9 Mar 2003, 7:05 AM
Yeah, but I liked the rhythm. I'm sure I will revise soon. This is the first draft.
Bill Z Bub replying on The lightest touch by INTRANSIT 9 Mar 2003, 7:03 AM
I didn't give you a seven. I forgot to vote! In fact, I wasn't sure what this one was about. Hints?
Bill Z Bub replying on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub 9 Mar 2003, 7:02 AM
Beefs? Uh, okay, at what e-mail address?
INTRANSIT on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub 9 Mar 2003, 6:54 AM
Like to discuss some beefs I have here. E-mail me. Canuckistan? I turn at the drowning pines, right?
INTRANSIT replying on The lightest touch by INTRANSIT 9 Mar 2003, 6:47 AM
Your seven suggests a lacking somewhere. Could you point me in the right direction sir?
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on To You (Please Critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642 9 Mar 2003, 6:25 AM
Wow! You truly are unique! Ace poeme, by the way!
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones 9 Mar 2003, 6:22 AM
Do you agree with the following lines by a famous poete called Burgers: Is it war? It's insanity.
cleverdevice on Few Words by Tom Colebrooke 9 Mar 2003, 5:17 AM
NO
Sawa on Unholy War by marvelis 9 Mar 2003, 12:23 AM
The rhyming's wonky.
wLeBlancw on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub 8 Mar 2003, 9:50 PM
and rubs his hands, his empty hands. isn't it obvious that they're empty?
Bill Z Bub on Tomb by GekoHawaii 8 Mar 2003, 9:08 PM
blork
Bill Z Bub on dreams by babygurl420 8 Mar 2003, 9:07 PM
Whoa, slow down and try some line breaks. Then get back to us. Don't call you, we'll call us.
Bill Z Bub on Waiting to exit by INTRANSIT 8 Mar 2003, 9:01 PM
okay, now I need time for some digestion! sounds good to me so far. I like this one, it has a familiar cast to it somehow... hmm.
Bill Z Bub on Best Present Ever by razorgrin 8 Mar 2003, 8:55 PM
you have a plush cthulhu too? what are the odds? that is not dead which can eternal lie and with strange aeons, even death may die. -bill, a fun guy from yuggoth