horus8
replying on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig
25 Feb 2003, 8:54 PM
lol.
When i was a young man growing up in southern ca. i skated with gator, and lance mountain a lot, but they did not write poetry this profound, but if they did think about all of the great tricks that would of never been invented. Perhaps you juggle? This poem has a long way to go, but you have to start somewhere i guess. What's your problem with razora? You are aware that in the writing spectrum she out classes you horribly, right? I don't think this deserves a zero, so here's a five.
Sure, i love his stuff. let me go take a look.
......wait then wtf is poetry about then!? I mean who cares about the spelling as long as u understand wutever it is he's putting, besides im not as judgemental as sum ppl r, so wut do I know? -.- *gets hit by a car while playing in traffic*
Sure y not. *shrugs*
You managed to entrall my attention till the end with a tedious and unrefined grasp till the part about "examine the murder weapon". Then you derailed me back to not caring about your outcome. Your beginning could use work as well. -6-
swell
Umm... that was eleven... twelve if you count the sentence previous...
Given that I have to engage at least three separate harnesses just to eat a scotch egg, how could I possibly give you a ride? And as for your revolting cheek fetish, I'm afraid that both my cheeks are artificial, and have to be suspended from my face in two small baskets, carefully secured with miniature harnesses. In reality, my entire body is an elaborate system of harnesses, randomly interspersed with purposeless slabs of jellied meat. I can still do Wheelies though. It's quite a sight, as I'm sure you can imagine!
I am finally finsihed after what i thought my last minutes on this earth i finally DID NOT read any of you poems or haikus thank the lord that i didn't it was easy judging by your titles they all sucked
1 more to go
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quote on quote: no one cares about yuo not even your spleen
im having such a good time putting down zeros for everything you have
oh but yes people docare about my spleen my good man zero zero zero
You are a funny thing, my bitter-sweet Seraphim.
Last night I thought for certain Nanshe was 'a girl' as you put it, I suppose you mean anatomically, but that makes no difference to me.
Will you take me for a ride? I know how to ignore the batteries hum. I'll lay back and press my cheek against yours. Pop-A- Wheelie.
aww another zero
too bad yet another zero