sk8boardandpoems
on Perversions by razorgrin
25 Feb 2003, 3:50 PM
zero zero
zero zero homeless is what you would be but no....poetry saved you by the hair of your chinny chin chin!
boo boo is what all your work is
We all ave our week points in life i cant spell and razorgrin obviously cant write either!
ahhh not another one i hate having to oput zeros..o wait is this razorgrin's work never mind i enojoy it!
ZERO ZERO ALL of it
HOW CAN SOMEONE GIVE THIS BULL**** A 10? THEY MUST EITHER BE VERY BLIND OR VERY VERY NICE TO GIVE A PIEACE OF SHIT LIKE THIS A 10!
perversion? does that have something to do with what happened to you as a little child? maybe....because all of your work sucks im not saying mine is the greatest in the world but come on im just in the 7th grade and anyway i dont think that people can really be judged on theor art or talent anyway i just joined poemrankers because i thought it woud be a nice expirence but as you can see my expirence has been anything but nice thanx to you razorgrin and quite franquely i dont care if i cant spell because neither can you!0
If only i had the time to rate all of your poems and haikus and whatever it is u write and give them all zeros u need help!
chuds in the mail? maybe you should send away for a brain and a soul because you obviously wont find one on ebay worth your reach
maybe you should buy a soul and a mind on ebay
ha ha ha ha i mock you and your silly little haikus
u think mine are bad that is no reason to comment that way you did
kink in space eh? i wish that you would be in space with out no air so that you may be left to die with out rendering the thought of living
Either:
(a) Nanshe is a girl, in which case you two are "Sisters in arms"
Or:
(b) Nanshe is a boy, in which case he is deliberately spouting sensitive bullshit to woo you. Unfortunately, he has neglected to put his trousers on this morning and, as such, his pitiful attempts to sound sophisticated have ended rather embarrassingly. He gets back on his Wheeled-Chair and rides off into the twilight. One of his wheels passes straight through a rather large pile of dog poo.
crap i am getting im back for leaving such nice remarks on mine so therefor i lower myself to your standards and play at your little game
i hate it and its crap all of it i wouldn't be surprised if he copied it from his friend that he killed out of jealousy
I hate it and i think its pure crap
Thank you my sweet, I shall plant this like a magic bean, like a last resort.
Let me take this opportunity to say the word Ally ten times.
Ally
Ally Ally
Ally Ally Ally
Ally Ally Ally Ally
Ally.
Keep telling yourself that, god'swife. Though do be careful not to confuse constipation with fear. It's a common misconception among females, especially those that like to think they have some sort of hold over their stronger, more intelligent male counterparts.
I'd like to take this opportunity to say the word crumpet ten times.
crumpet crumpet crumpet crumpet crumpet crumpet crumpet crumpet crumpet crumpet