Nanshe
on (untitled) by Ray
24 Feb 2003, 4:50 PM
so....dare I say...bad?
Have you a pregnant chickie with yoooooooooooou? Great fun, getting there, eh?
I thought you were going boarding???
I have a room and two day ski pass at bear mountain. We are expecting a foot in a half of snowsky. This poem is nucking futs & a pyle of shite. i like pregnant chick boobies , in my mouthsky.
I think it's the scotch ON THE ROCKS more so than being a capper, MISTER FOSTER.
This entire series is money, my friend. Well done.
I have an low-maintenance gold fish or 2 (Hannibal, and soon-to-be-eaten-so-i-don't-have-a-name- for-a-month-or-two).
And a bumble bee catfish.
One of my goldfish (H) is 4 years old, and regularly eats his tank-mates, excepting Bee. Thus the name. Not sure of the gender, but following the mythic tradition, I ascribe him a penis.
Please accept my sincerest condolences!!!!!!11
Is the awful quality of "less than a sentence 2" and "less than a sentence 3" compared to the genius "less than a sentence" due to your mishap?
He drinks for free, otherwise... He couldn't. Snow is coming i must go board now, thanks for earlier by the way.
What? fuck for free, or approach it like david carridean. lol.
yes, i agree, suicide is perfect for you.
thats funny.
lets see what kind of shit
you come up with when you post
your poetry,
you insipid, unoriginal waif.
you already make me want to take
a hot iron to my face.
That's pretty good. I was expecting shit. What kind of fish do you have? I have a snow flake eel and a parrot fish they are loads of fun. WAIT... you have an ichthyusaurus in the [pool and your old lady's skinny dipping dressed up as a HAREM GIRL THAT YOU PURCHAESED FOR A DIME BACK IN COLLEGE when you learned the word diaphanous, yes friend this is a sad and common them. i'm going skiing. see you.
Fuzzy69navel wants to know if we are in la la land? Thats funny fuzzy, you obviously have a fine grasp upon reality judging from your user name and dialectic middle ground.
Hope it wasn't something I said. :)
Nice use of form, a bit heavy on the assonance--beware of sounding too sing-songy. 6.
Don't be discouraged. Keep trying. We are all trying.
Sorry I don't type so well since my accident. I'm still getting used to using one elbow and one foot on the modified keyboard. The Doctors think I am coming along nicely.
yall need to go to www.poemsbybastards.com its more of yalls type of thing
ok you people scare me you really need some mental help!
is this like some kind of devil worship site or something or are all yall people in la la land or something?
i dont understand why all you people have to be rude about everyones poems i mean like all of yours are perfect