spank me baby yeah
on Eros, and Psycho by horus8
21 Feb 2003, 10:18 AM
NOTHING WRONG WITH OBNOXIOUSNESS, CULTURED DUDES ARE ALWAYS THAT WAY.
THIS ROCKS, LIKE ALL THAT EROS STUFF AND ITS IMAGINATIVE. I'LL STICK TO STICKMEN FROM NOW ON
AN ENJOYABLE READ, ROMANTIC LIKE MY CURRY LIM
I LOVE THESE, HAYIKU THINGS HOW DO YOU DO THEM PIG MAN?
CLEVER, AND SHORT JUST LIKE MY DAD
MY HEAD CANT TAKE THIS BUT YOUR AN INTELLECTUAL ICON, GECKOBLAST 7
Yes I have. A Summer living pretty much alone on a college campus will do that to you. On the other hand when everyone comes back in the Fall you appreciate the company that much more.
P.S. It's a myth that lemmings jump off cliffs.
Don't fly off the handle or anything.
Dee-lightful anal poem. Read my 'perversions' limericks. this has a few problems in the scanning, but fun nonetheless.
How about you go fuck your mother, then ride your pet lemming off a precipice, Cunt? Oh, don't forget to smear shit all over you and lube your wheels for battle against your own face and asshole, asshole. How about i go over to your work and go....oh, by jove, do shut up muffy you aRE MAKING THE TURD IN MY TEA CUP SINK SO, NO FUCK FACE Y-O-U S-H-U-T THE FUCK UP, i don't recal asking for your input James, go shine your fucking hot rod.
I wish to comment on this and fear the ramnifications for you as some think you as I and that is not the case. However I dont usually curse but fuck them !
This is a great piece of work, keep your chin up and your pen on paper, you grace it my good sir...8
liked this more have a six
boring, wake me when your better.
I suck too
God made it rain for 40 days and 40 nights in the old testament, his wrath for human selfishness, line 2 was merely a stylised reference to that, and line 3 was changed to feature Judas who represents the worst of humanity. It was a practise of literature NJ, and the reason if anyone is intersted why the dedication to GW, its due to her 'Confederate grey' line in one of her poems, I think stigmata skies is at least imaginative if nothing elso (inspired by the wonderful GW)
Eh, so so. Guess I just couldn't relate to it all that well and didn't really see the vision you were going for.
Ummm....I really had no idea where this was going. The pacing and feel of the poem seem ok, but what was the narrative of the poem trying to accomplish. I just don't see it.
Do shut up.
yarg. i hate you now as well.
Good start. please take it somewhere. otherwise good.