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Sawa on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined 18 Feb 2003, 3:38 PM
Pretty damn good. 8.
<~> on stars of wonder by rompingcat 18 Feb 2003, 3:31 PM
star of wonder, star of night, star with royal beauty bright, westward leading, still proceeding....
<~> on The Blooding by Mr Pig 18 Feb 2003, 3:30 PM
things i like: cut glass accents wilder than a foxglove vivisected sky disappointemnt like a late picasso thing i don't: "always" 2 lines in a row please explain because i don't understand this line: Blurred in salt tears that burned the foxes blood,
<~> on she said by Bill Z Bub 18 Feb 2003, 3:26 PM
nice and tight, now. goodjob.
Shardik on The Voice of the Night (dedicated to Mr. PIG) by Sylvia Bravo 18 Feb 2003, 2:12 PM
fresh.
razorgrin on Highlights From a Conversation at the Laundromat by bunniesnangels 18 Feb 2003, 1:54 PM
Nice story, good use of a moral. Solid.
razorgrin on Atonement by aperfecttool77 18 Feb 2003, 1:51 PM
I'm sorry you were conceived, mr.tool. I speak that utterly sincerely. the world would be just a little sunnier if not only that poeme, but you and everything connected to you didn't exist. BOO! Boo-urns!
razorgrin replying on On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels 18 Feb 2003, 1:49 PM
I would sell that guy next to me's soul for a roast beef sandwich right now.
razorgrin replying on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin 18 Feb 2003, 1:47 PM
It is a sexual slang term as well. Could be 'quailing'. I don't want to look it up either way, so it shall remain a mystery.
bunniesnangels on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin 18 Feb 2003, 1:46 PM
There's no such word as "qualing" in my dictionary, but then again, I'm an American..
bunniesnangels replying on On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels 18 Feb 2003, 1:44 PM
me too. meat = gooooood.
razorgrin on On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels 18 Feb 2003, 1:35 PM
I'm sorry.
<~> on The Poet by muffin 18 Feb 2003, 12:35 PM
part of me wants to tell you to write about your observations instead of you imaginings, but then there's another part of me that thinks you maybe should get it all out in a journal first, and then maybe go read some literature, and then some literary criticism (www.poets.org is a good source) and then, after aeons of study, and a cathartic dawn of comprehension, then, and only then, should you re-endeavor to write an poeme. and another part of me thinks i should go bowling. who will win? i dunno.
<~> on Atonement by aperfecttool77 18 Feb 2003, 12:31 PM
i'm sorry i read this poem.
mindsigns replying on April Showers by mindsigns 18 Feb 2003, 12:07 PM
Nicholas, if the poem was about the month of april I'd agree, seeing i just finished shoveling 25 inches a nice fresh snow from the drive way, and hey it's still cold and windy in April too- just to remind you
scitz on To Laugh Or Cry by casey 18 Feb 2003, 11:40 AM
BETTER THAN THE OTHER ONE, BUT ALAS STILL POO ...4 IMMORTALIZE BEAUTY IN PERSONNIFYING MORE THAN THE OBVIOUS, DESCRIBE HOW YOU FEEL, LOYAL TO YOUR FEELINGS, NOT THE RHYME STRUCTURE.....
scitz on Close by casey 18 Feb 2003, 11:38 AM
sorry but this is a turd, 3 IS ALL I CAN MUSTER
scitz on Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones 18 Feb 2003, 11:37 AM
oh god what have you done, my secrets out ..shit #7
Ranger on Synchronicity (Senryu) by bunniesnangels 18 Feb 2003, 11:35 AM
Intriguing... a fabulous collection of haikus.
Ranger on For my wife by INTRANSIT 18 Feb 2003, 11:31 AM
Good stuff