Ranger
on with no words to write (v2) by nentwined
18 Feb 2003, 11:30 AM
Fair enough
And people think i don't make any sense?
Could you fucking be a little more cryptic my dogs head isn't cocked to the left enough.
Now are you saying i am a smurf
that i want to fuck a smurf
or that i'm a blue midget(from holding my breath in anticipation)
with an inkling affinity for cartoons
about the same trend?
heh. I have a sudden urge to go vegan.
Which part of this having 18 syllabols didn't you grasp. The 1 or the 8? Don't get me wrong, because i bend the rules everywhere, but it's unacceptable when dealing with haikus. it's the foundation of the structure and when dealing in this arena it's critical.
You can eat the kids too. Use the same recipes as for pork, but apparently the palms of the hands are particularly good fried. On the whole, though, you can't go wrong with stir-frying. NEVER eat human brains, though.
Delightful.
Groovin'. Chive-tastic. All I get is the drunk/junkie homeless doing their thing in the graveyard across the street from my place. Maybe I should offer chives?
Well, I'm amused. Soap-droppingly good.
Your a bit too early. Maybe in April I'll empathise. But today is very cold and windy. So cold and windy your head hurts if you forget your hat.
How charming my dear, thank you this is wonderful god bless you
See you can do it, when you try.
Top marks.
I think you could have told this better avoiding the cliches, you've written a lot without saying much, try and evoke more depth to your work. -4-
Silverstem hit it, it is dreamy and enchanted, so glad you used saturn and not Uranus - beautifully done -9-
Thank you so much my darling Gods Wife, I knew something was not quite together and you are quite right. I am very pleased with this now please offer me one more perusal and comment.
Or the girl that can chop off your pee pee with a potato peeler?
Very good, but the tense is mixed up. It's either 'comes' or 'Sun bled........silver assasin appeared".
Beautiful. Sounds like your "both" in love.
thank you. :) It is nice to think that my poetry skills may be slowly improving.