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Teen14 replying on A Little Nightmare by Teen14 31 Jan 2003, 1:53 PM
It's supposed to capture the feelings and emotions of a nightmare. That's why it's a LYRICAL poem.
Shardik replying on The darkest woods ever by Shardik 31 Jan 2003, 1:52 PM
I would, but unfortunately i never went to school, and when i was there... English was definitely my worst subject. So, that said... let's blame the inorganic being i wrestled with in the new mexican desert on 20 buttons of peyote, and my relentless interest behind who really pushes the smoke button in the city of Oz. Shall we? Great... here's how i break free. enjoy your Sexton. http://gangbox.com/mp3/dear%20mrs%20sexton.mp3
Ranger replying on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike 31 Jan 2003, 1:05 PM
Have you read any of Caducus' poems? Try "Sawn off shotgun blues", or "Quarry of the Devil and Croupier". His is not teen angst. You're right about Blade, though.
Ranger on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin 31 Jan 2003, 1:02 PM
Exactly.
Ranger on Lovers Game by scitz 31 Jan 2003, 12:58 PM
Pretty good. sado-masochism I believe has a wossname, hyphon type thing in between.
Ranger on Despair by Caducus 31 Jan 2003, 12:56 PM
Caducus, perhaps you should split it up so that the 'forgive me's are in seperate stanzas from the rest? It might add a little to the structure.
Ranger on All I Feel by brokenwing 31 Jan 2003, 12:52 PM
'Fluorescent' Like the poem, it is one of your best.
Ranger replying on unsent by Bill Z Bub 31 Jan 2003, 12:50 PM
Friends are what we'll always be? Something like that? Ah well. Still like it.
Ranger on A Little Nightmare by Teen14 31 Jan 2003, 12:47 PM
Bold, straight to the point although I still don't know what the nightmare is.
Ranger on Elegy by Quarton 31 Jan 2003, 12:45 PM
Yep, I like it-it's a lyric, not a free verse as far as I can see. Good stuff. If you read my latest attempt you'll see that Icarus doesn't need his wings, he's got a plane.
Ranger on As I lay by Katie 31 Jan 2003, 12:42 PM
In my opinion this is too much just a letter. Split the lines a bit. I agree with brokenwing, this does have potential, but I don't think that this is fully complete. Keep at it.
Ranger replying on Love spank by Shardik 31 Jan 2003, 12:38 PM
WHAT!!! You mean you don't do the office worker? Or the 'teacher'? Shame on you, shame on you...
Shardik replying on Jesus rides the comet by Shardik 31 Jan 2003, 12:36 PM
Darling... I did it all for you. Enjoy... you inspire me also. http://gangbox.com/mp3/Jesus%20Rides%20The%20Comet.mp3
Shardik replying on Jesus rides the comet by Shardik 31 Jan 2003, 12:32 PM
Thank you very much... Would you like to hear it? Vuala! enjoy... http://gangbox.com/mp3/Jesus%20Rides%20The%20Comet.mp3
Ranger replying on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger 31 Jan 2003, 12:30 PM
Sorry?
thepinkbunnyofdoom on Jesus rides the comet by Shardik 31 Jan 2003, 12:17 PM
Got to agree with razorgrin this is quite swell.
thepinkbunnyofdoom on Elegy by Quarton 31 Jan 2003, 12:13 PM
Only one word is needed to describe this. Good!
thepinkbunnyofdoom on Equality by Freethinker1602 31 Jan 2003, 12:09 PM
I know I don't have any room to talk but I don't know the "so run far and pray your feet be swift be quick witted" just Doesn't seem to fit in well.
razorgrin on Jesus rides the comet by Shardik 31 Jan 2003, 12:03 PM
Damn fine. quality use of imagery. "Dracula sold out to the japanese" and "Atlas shrugs, I guess he's got the clap again" are mighty good. splendiferous
razorgrin on For Brianna by MaliqaTara 31 Jan 2003, 12:00 PM
The sincerity of the emotion comes through really well. As a poem, it has some technical flaws, but not to any huge degree. I'm not even going to say anything blasphemous because of the religious content. Needs a little polishing, but has some shine already.