horus8
replying on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub
30 Jan 2003, 1:37 AM
Question...Cunt bandaid? answer...that tampon stuck to the 'small' of your back (i can sense that you have some blockage there). DON'T REMOVE IT THOUGH! it's dangerous a bit 'leechy'...you'll have to burn it off with the power of W-ASS-P poetry. therefore, point your mouth at it (rotate your head 180 degrees first) than speak. any utterance, preferably a sonic chirp (that's where you go off formalizing the dot to dots between senti-mental poets, pimples, street poets etc. I feel very confident that the drift from your mouth will free you from this parasite that's reverse nipple tweaking you currently...gamble on your sonic chirp. consentrate.
ohh guess what i had for dinner tonight? that's right. bitch. The big BM with a tossed cock salad. scrumptious really
Zest is a soap that leaves very little film, like this poem.
how could i not ten this?
What am i chopped liver? i've read this before though, correct..this edit's clean. nice onee
Brave.
din't - is this a new word or a typo? The last part sounds like you could rap it. Are you one of those hard hittn' street poete's?
The title of the film should be in quotations not apostrophes. That is unless you put quotations around what the character on the answering machine is saying, which would be proper and justify what your are doing at that point. Is "Weneverlaughedsohard" (note proper use) a word. I looked it up and it was not in the dictionary.
To further clarify: Sturgis is actually a quaint town on the northern fringe of the Black Hills in South Dakota. Do you need to know where South Dakota is?
nice bit. Is it a poem? Sure, if you say it is. But whats Sturgis?
Very nice,
but I'm not paid to be opening these boxes.
But still...
hrmmmm.
The second half is excellent.
I tried it. Then got nervous and replaced it with something new. What say you?
you will go on a long journey
When you're right, you're right. Thankya kindly. Now get out thar and vote, pardner!
d'oh!
Well this does show moderate talent. We all know that you are capable of far more superior works...It provided something else for me to think about. ThX, Ranger.
l8r. I kinda like ya. YOu have a good personality
thepinkbunnyofdoom
replying on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar
29 Jan 2003, 6:07 PM
i have another fun game for them to play its called russian roulette? Any takers?
thepinkbunnyofdoom
replying on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar
29 Jan 2003, 6:04 PM
What next D.A. you want to give me a spelling lesson?
you can write better then me so i got to give u props 4 that. Also one of the best poems i've read 2date on this site. I like it when people say what they feel, most users on this site write to get points and please