I agree its a ten but you might change threw to through. It'd make it so that someone didn't mentally trip over your words, unless that was what you were going for.

can't really say anything that hasn't been said already, whatev, nice

Been there done that and i like this one. So i give you an dime.

nice, i like when you have to reread sopmething, it's a sign that its good work, i'll give it a 10

Wow were screwed up fairy tale you got there but i liked it till i got to the captain part but it got good again with the wolf so here is a great big Eight

must not have been hidden to well if you found it but nice as far as a Haiku goes so I give it a 9. P.S. Add the words "in Bed" to all your fortunes cookie sayings and they take on a whole new meaning.

Very sweet. I'm a sucker for break ups so its an 8.

original. strange but original. bsed soley on that a ten.

your a Mondern Day Confusus

not your best work but still interesting so i'll give it a 7

I know its probably just one of those random things seeing as to how this was here before i even joined poemranker but your first "dootle" looks like a bunny and this is just so cool so 10

Great feeling behind your words but you got a little abstract toward the end. Kin would also sound cooler if you replaced it with breathern <- (Probably mispelled that but who cares). I give it a nine.

Whoa, this is quite....ummm....interesting. All of them seem to work well but the last one. nice job, what fetish is next?

very nice. :)

such depth i wouldn't even dare to try and phathom the the meaning but some how it sings to my soul. Execellent poem.

Nice title. I felt like that too(although never on a horse).

Eww... Sick but not as good as the others this get a 7. It might have been more if i had any clue as to what scat was.

Beautiful