thepinkbunnyofdoom
on Perversions by razorgrin
29 Jan 2003, 2:20 PM
not as funny as 3. might it be possibble to get you to write a 4th? these are just too interesting.
You said i was like charles manson? Like you have room to talk. your creepy. But oddly enough i find this poem so funny i gave it a ten. now i need to go gouge me eyes out for reading this.
realy good that made me piss!!!!!!
please do some more.
Sure such as icarus who flew too close to the sun, hercules, achilles, the the oddesy, and the list is endless. If there was a book published about greek mytholoy i have probalby read it. I love greek mythology. Jason and the argonauts is one of my favorites razorgrin How bout you?
Is poetandknowit the same person as dark angel?!
Ok a Poem about vegatables that mentions Dr. Lector? Just for mentioning the last name of Hannibal you Would get a ten by me but still, Cabbage? Hows an 8 sound.
yes, a lot of the guys i know use her for "benefits" and then leave her all alone. i guess they're attracted to her beauty but they never seem to look closer. so yes, this is about amanda
Where did you pull that from? I see no racism, but then again, I did just look directly into a light bulb, which might have impaired my vision somewhat...
Well, that was quite the angst-wank. Surprised you could keep it up as long as you did. Go put on some damn clearasil.
Eww..nationalism and poor writing. Fail!
Nice, Pygmalion getting very frustrated. The violence is very well done, which is rare.
We had spring rolls on New year's eve. As opposed to my longpig suggestion. I dig spring as a season, though not as an odour. 8, as it caused me to think of at least two things while reading it.
OH JESU WHAT HAVE I BECOME?
Why are all your poemes so racist? Black people have just as much right to bask on this planet as you or I. But you won't even let them come out at night to feed. How dare you!?
It means you're in way over your head, kid. My advice to you would be to get out before you freak out. I think you catch my drift...
And it would please me to know exactly what is meant by this comment.
Still the best poem on the site. I would kill the all cap thing, but damn, who cares, this is just good. Had to come read it again.
You are the one true king of the Masonic order of odd balls.
The flip flopping of voice and context is awkward. There a a few nice lines, but there is still work to be done here.
Is this about Amanda?