JakeBike
replying on poemrancour by JakeBike
21 Jan 2003, 12:03 PM
true. shall i delete it then?
didn't
someone had to do it.
Wow. What a fucking waste of time.
indubitably, Good Sir.
what matter what name i choose when you delete anything honest?
200 really? it's more like 50 under DA of course. why would you feel the need to communicate with me under a different name?
-=AIDS=-
Why don't you enlighten me with who you are so I can read some of your 200 poems. Perhaps I would be able to learn something. Then again if it's like the lovely ode above, perhaps not.
I am so glad you have it all figured out. Enjoy your assumptions! I am sure they will sustain you!
Zzinia66 but of course. It's pleasure to interact with you again. Thank you for finding me so damn fascinating and for wasting your precious time dealing with a child like me.
Silly girl. zero is my mouthpiece. Or one of them. There are more than 200 poems with my stamp on them on this site.
Here's to your condoms always breaking! May ye be barefoote and Pregnant until the end of your days!
crack! crack crack crack! :squaw: crack!
and how many have you written? none. go read condom breaks....you think that's a haiku deserving of a zero? I deleted your comments because you were annoying and you kept changing your score.
For God's sake, man -- no matter how admirable the sentiment may be, even as rhetoric this is godawful
The poem is quite good. However, get off your damn guilt trip about the fact that we heved and fought our way to the top of the pile. Do you really think that is the sabre-toothed tiger had come to take over the world instead of us, they'd really try and treat us well? Dammit, they lost. And we won. Too bad for them. Now serve me my steak -- rare, please.
The title is better than the body. But I do like the title.
tea tree shampoo? or something a little more violet?
A bit too mawkish for my taste but I am sure some will like it. Also, too many cliches like:
your radiant beauty....
melt with only your smile....
dark sea of turmoil....
gaze upon your beauty....
etc...etc.