Bill Z Bub
replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub
19 Dec 2002, 8:46 PM
In fact, I just realized,
I made the top 15! Number 11 right now.
Holy mother of pearl!
KwanYin have mercy on this insignificant worm.
I am shocked. Truly shocked.
Just waiting for the inevitable backlash votes...
thanks, that's exactly what I was trying to do, because most poems I've read about a writer's mother are nothing but sentimental crap. glad you liked it.
You're too kind. I want to give it a new title, but this is my highest ranked piece yet, and I don't want to erase the votes. I need the ego boost.
Perhaps later.
i'll drink some skaldic brew to that.the titles kind of pauly shore, but the piece is impeccable..
you're right. a nice one two. thanks for teaching it to me.???
Drat!
I'll get you someday, LETO!
SOMEDAY!
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!
(lower curtain)
(end of act 1)
thank you ! thankyou!
Yes, I am quite the thesbian.
I mean, thespenian.
No, thistlepen!
Ack, thestplenisthle!
THESPIAN!
sorta whitestripes but, black and square "the black square! BLACKSQUARES YEAH! LIVE FROM LOS ANGELES CALIFORNIA THE BLACKSQUARES. OPENING UP FOR sorry the cads, naturally.K
well.
not bad.
not great, but not bad.
HARSH
ALMOST BUT YOUR FORGETING CAPATALIZATION
THANX
where you do work? at a peanut butter plant? kumquates are damn crazy fruit fun..i should know my grandma had a tree. it's also impossible for an eigth grader to say the word with out laughing..
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 8:08 PM
LJFC!
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"eat my nuts"? I have to listen to that all day at work! I don't want to have to listen to that when I come home to poemranker!
now wheres my dinner? I want kumquats!
its got a beat, you can dance to it,
i give it a top ten, a platinum record,
a million downloads on napster.
booyah grandma, booyah!
" You can feel it now, it's in the dirt
Labour Day is drawing near.
A time to sing a shout for joy.
In Bangcock was born a boy."
You're right! I like it better now!
Bill Z Bub
replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 7:54 PM
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Bill Z Bub
replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 7:53 PM
<b>my tornado has no nose.</b>
<i>how does it smell?</i>
<b>awful!</b>
worthy of a LOL,
but not quite a ROTFLMAO.
IMHO
Keep working on it. It's starting to shape up nicely.
I love these lines:
"Simply burn the awful words"
"I dare you not to leave my things in the dust"
and
"Oh imagine
The poor furniture"
~sniff~
poor, poor furniture...