Caducus
on The Dance by Quarton
20 Dec 2002, 5:17 AM
A thoughtful piece of lit, well done sir.
a good poem but marred by interruptions while reading due to the grammar, spelling. I too have been damned for the same wrong, not bad -6-
better
I gotta love ya ! wonder how many kids twisters spawned?
Distinctive,poignant a fine read -8-
Bugger, I'm agreeing with poetandknowit! This is incredible, thank you NLD!
Not bad, my friend, not bad at all. I like the line "praying for a moment..."
8/10
If you're going to steal REM's lyrics, please at least try to disguise them. Even better, DON'T STEAL THEM AT ALL!
hehehehe quite insane, thats why i like it, a bit solpcistic though deserves a 9 but ill give you a 10
its grrreat but to be honnest the ending wasnt as good as the main body but even so worth everysingle point of the ten it got
Have you considered learning how to write?
Ha. Thanks, man. And for another brief second, I'm swingin' at the top.
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So thats why Dark Angel is all over those lists. Hm.
No out of spite, just showing the nature of the beast. When Settle logs in he will give all the poems in the top 15 0s, not out of spite, but to get Dark Angel's poems to fill both the best and worst lists. It is his ultimate tribute to nonsense. I originally gave this a 5. But now, you are number 3 on the billboard charts.
I was commenting on the fact that this poem appeared in the top 15 for about an hour before someone gave it a zero out of spite.
thats all.
I'm going to rewrite it anyway.
What are you talking about?
...and its gone. ephemeral, intransient, and impermanent. like love and life and the cherry blossoms. and a cold steam whistle on a sunday afternoon.
Have you ever considered learning to spell before subjecting us to this crap?
Utter stupidity. do you really think we give a shit about your urinary tract. Come on show some depth.
WTF was that?
Its kinda like winning an Oscar, innit?
ie totally meaningless, and somewhat random.
I will revise this one later.