Nicholas Jones
replying on Popaul by Nicholas Jones
20 Dec 2002, 1:06 PM
My Phd thesis is about a Welsh poet called Harri Webb. He wrote mainly in English, but also sometimes in Welsh, and his poetry is characterised by a strong political commitment to socialist and nationalist beliefs, and also a strong vein of humour. I actually put some of his poems on poemranker, under the name 'Gwyrfab' (a pseudonym often used by Webb) to see what people would say. I suppose that's technically against the rules, but I never pretended I wrote them. Merry Christmas, everybody, by the way.
jesus you're right. that is disturbing, but not as disturbing as getting nude right now with johoba oil...lubing down proper, and snorting some tinsel.
Popaul is the name of the character in the film. He's a butcher and a murderer. He seduces the schoolteacher by cooking her a fine leg of lamb. Sounds like a good technique to me; my culinary abilities are excellent.
self plug? who me? never, i my friend am not a cad.....wait a minute..i am a cad chicky shaw chew chewy wicky chew..shaw wah wah..naw it's just a song a wrote last week nothing big nothing small just another one of my little baby smurfs marching to the beat of a differenr drum, they're purple...you see.
I still know nothing of music but what I hear. Self plug,last comment? I'll try to get to L.A. Next year. Home comp. on fritz. I'll need thos addresses later,again.
horus8
replying on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
20 Dec 2002, 12:21 PM
Subtext is everywhere. Even on toothpaste tubes. Did you ever notice something always goes miserably wrong this time of year repeatedly? i fucking despise the holidays..i'm not going to ruin it for everyone else, but everyone should know that at&t and fingerhut are SATAN SATAN SATAN. that is all i care to say. EVIL EVIL EVIL. would anyone like some peanut brittle?o
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Great job censoring your comments! Afterall, it is far better to delete the truth than to face up to it.
"On that day many will say to Me, 'Lord, Lord, did we not prophesy in Your Name, and cast out demons in Your Name, and do many mighty works in Your Name?' And then will I declare to them, 'I never knew you; depart from Me, you evildoers.'" - Jesu
your so intelligent to call this fragment, because it is? pretty though, my problem with poetry like this is that it doesn't lose anything to gain anything...it doesn't take any chances..it's what i would term 'safe' poetry. In other words it wont change the world, but maybe a fragment of the world like the ivory coast? also, because it is missing that last rhyming stanza to push it over the top, you will continue to not get tens, but nines christof. i'm sure some schmuch will come along and be like omg and give it a ten within the next ten minutes, but i feel robbed..totally second placed..wich isn't necessarily bad all the time. i guess.
NICE
Fixing the grammer and the typos would be like giving Quasimoto hearing-aids. He'd be better off, but still very very ugly.
an interesting poem, the mixture of the two sets of
imagery is repellant, brings to mind eating disorders, perhaps that was the intention of the poet, no matter a poem takes on a life of its own once it is born. Smooth blending of imagery, I don't know what to make of the, hmm, old world nature of the foods mentioned...
This coming from some doof who hasn't posted a poem. So I say to you: are you joking kind sir? Have you read my stuff? Because if you have, you would realize how foolish this statement looks. Would you consider answering an ad to be slaughtered? And the let some chap surgically remove your testacies. Pop them in the over for a good bake and the sit down for a snack. My friend, this is what the world has come to. Yes, yes. Indeed.
But a true story!
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god that was disgusting i apologize -DOCCCCCC !
The worse thing to eat with nuts has to be cheese.
Like a methsulah, if i could be a tree it would be a palm tree on a nudist beach. This was simple, aeroplane poetry but i liked it a lot. -7-
Like a methsulah, if i could be a tree it would be a palm tree on a nudist beach. This was simple, aeroplane poetry but i liked it a lot. -7-