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Bill Z Bub on Junk by Bonehiss 20 Dec 2002, 5:11 PM

don't let the man get his hands on your junk. gotta love this piece, 'cuz you've got the funk

Bill Z Bub on Splendid Discovery by blkarakagain 20 Dec 2002, 5:07 PM

rough, immediate, alive, sensual. keep going!

Bachus on The Party by blkarak 20 Dec 2002, 4:57 PM

you had my attention until you went "wassup", then i started picking my belly button and reading the globe again. what? no nitros? tsk. it's also a mind crunch to read and really bloated, you could of said it all with one sentence. "Stupid fucking rave full of complaisant retards, and then some." shame really. hope you're okay?

horus8 on Morning Conversation by lexicon 20 Dec 2002, 4:27 PM

that's a nice one.

horus8 on the story of an arrogant butterfly by kawakurdi 20 Dec 2002, 4:26 PM

jesus christ it's like butter fly day...butter fly day butter fly day look at mee coccooning on butter fly die...woah. can i just say you are obviously the happy person i could ever possibly read/meet. thanks.w

New Life Drug replying on When Im Gone by New Life Drug 20 Dec 2002, 4:25 PM

i'm glad you like those lines.. those are my faves too. I want this to be moving...

New Life Drug replying on pee haiku by New Life Drug 20 Dec 2002, 4:23 PM

depth. I'm tired of depth. You probably don't give a shit about my urinary tract, but it could be anyone's urinary tract. I think haikus were meant to be different. If anyone disagrees, who cares. I like it.

horus8 on Seasons by impaired 20 Dec 2002, 4:22 PM

"my body spasms as I soak in the rays" can i just say, what?s

horus8 on Kept Safe by trev086 20 Dec 2002, 4:19 PM

take the question marks out, and than unfortunately every word, but two. ~ Trevor Greene. You see trevor, sometimes a blank letter can say so much more. like my mind is blank. use your fucking imagination for the love of a beutifull special young lady could you, please? PLEASE!. thanks, love horus8. p.s merry christmas.

horus8 on Come Back to Me by jlanza 20 Dec 2002, 4:14 PM

i should of finger banged you harder, but with my cactus, and a handful of dry mud. three hundred miles? that's not love sweety that's a mild crush. love, is a talking brain tumor and a late cable bill w/ a bit of movie popcorn in your hair..

horus8 on I have no Idea?...? by brazen 20 Dec 2002, 4:10 PM

"foozle" sweet. preys gotta go back to pray. "empty acres take up more space then muddled cities", might works better moved to the last stanza. perhaps not, subways scare the hell out of me and so does the sky. usually.m

INTRANSIT replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 20 Dec 2002, 4:08 PM

Thanks for the comments folks. I think it's quite possibly the worst thing I've ever written. i dunno.

horus8 on Curse by OneFingerAnswer 20 Dec 2002, 4:05 PM

line 9 typo, beautifull and true.??

marvelis on futile existence by chinstrap 20 Dec 2002, 3:06 PM

funny and works

horus8 replying on "Bored?" "Let's eat my nuts?" by Bachus 20 Dec 2002, 2:33 PM

consider yourself. flashed. chicky chaw, chicky wicky wahhhwick wik wah.

horus8 on terrorism and break dancing by w~* ATHENA *~w 20 Dec 2002, 1:58 PM

kool.atleast it's not t.s eliot. is it? merry christmas and all that other arm funk.

Ranger on Junk by Bonehiss 20 Dec 2002, 1:48 PM

Quite good-possibly better as a lyric?

SP REYNOLDS on "Bored?" "Let's eat my nuts?" by Bachus 20 Dec 2002, 1:29 PM

FLASHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY___________

SP REYNOLDS on "Bored?" "Let's eat my nuts?" by Bachus 20 Dec 2002, 1:28 PM

Had no idea you could bend that way - 8

horus8 replying on A christmas thought by keatsImnot 20 Dec 2002, 1:11 PM

Depart from Me, you evildoers, by Jesu the 2nd. An story that is not an poeme complete with prawne sketches and diagrams you could have powder packets and formulas for enbrowning liquids..the pieces could be shoe horns, beaks, and hoofs...it could be a board game action figure spin off book toy combinations complete with floating pirate ships and aids in a break in case of emergency vial...no wait..I KNOW AIDS PILLS jesus christ this could be huge shhh.