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scitz on Frozen Angel by Ranger 21 Dec 2002, 5:18 AM

This is beautiful, ahead of your years ranger 8

scitz on lost by Katie 21 Dec 2002, 5:15 AM

innocent, sweet, you are obviously a seed of a writer but its quite refreshing to see work from the heart warts and all

scitz on The Sons and Daughters of the New Light by Bonehiss 21 Dec 2002, 5:12 AM

I read it -all- and am exhausted, I think you could make your point cleared more concisely, the 6 mins it took to study it is just the start now i have to think about it before voting. Hope you will answer any questions if i have any?

wOrnella Mutiw on Merry days. by Plasticgirlwithgun 21 Dec 2002, 4:02 AM

You're quite ignorant, but I won't hold it against you since you're plastic. If you read carefully you will note that I am not from Oklahoma but from a state West of Oklahoma. I actually have been to Oklahom...lovely place...no spineless, annoying, hags like you floating around. Enjoy the egg nog and honey bun!

scitz on Merry days. by Plasticgirlwithgun 21 Dec 2002, 2:50 AM

Here's some humbugs to suck on you miserable git. 5

Plasticgirlwithgun on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub 21 Dec 2002, 2:36 AM

Cellphones are lame.Your poem is rather good though.

Plasticgirlwithgun replying on Merry days. by Plasticgirlwithgun 21 Dec 2002, 2:24 AM

A little bitterness in your words does not help because your poem sucks anyways.Now go choke you critical wench and go fuck your cousin while you're at it. Merry Christmas. :)

wOrnella Mutiw on Merry days. by Plasticgirlwithgun 21 Dec 2002, 1:39 AM

a little bitterness is always good but not in your poetry because it sucks........2

wOrnella Mutiw on lost by Katie 21 Dec 2002, 1:37 AM

"Through are pain"...change that. For your age it's not bad, but try to experiment with different subject matters. There's more to life than guys....like smurfs.

wOrnella Mutiw on pee haiku by New Life Drug 21 Dec 2002, 1:33 AM

Pissing....when you really have to go can be somewhat of an orgasmic experience...your haiku on the other hand is not!

wOrnella Mutiw on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub 21 Dec 2002, 1:30 AM

Good use of imagery. I liked it....8

scitz on For you my dear. by Plasticgirlwithgun 21 Dec 2002, 1:28 AM

Charmingly vicious 7

Bachus replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus 20 Dec 2002, 8:05 PM

i regret to inform that not only am i sane, but i can sit through a whole dinner without being rude or excusing myself early to smoke once. i am proud of myself and growing a little more 'spiritually' (physically) even as we speak. lol.

horus8 on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20 Dec 2002, 7:53 PM

There once was some aids in a crayon. but since i was not yet a man It melted my nipple (now called a schmipple) coloring, was never that simple!

horus8 on ???? ___P??rf????t___G??l by da_dark_wan 20 Dec 2002, 7:40 PM

you ever see best in show? "he likes soup" "i like soup" we could talk or not talk forever". we have lots in common.

horus8 on RMAED by deep-as-a-puddle 20 Dec 2002, 7:34 PM

i would of ended with spray paint your eyeballs for maximum confusion diffusion. than later... save the tongue ripping for an oral sex transfusion. trust me, i'm stupid.

Bachus on Comfort Food by jessicazee 20 Dec 2002, 7:14 PM

"snug lumpia" are better than pierogis any day. this was a great poem and still will be later, after 'was'.

Bachus on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub 20 Dec 2002, 5:34 PM

when the infant is cradled it stops it's baby wailing perhaphs un-rocked? last stanza's gold.

INTRANSIT on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub 20 Dec 2002, 5:17 PM

Hey! Down in front! damn people.

Bill Z Bub on Come Back to Me by jlanza 20 Dec 2002, 5:15 PM

ah, young romance. and I just recieved a letter from my highschool sweetheart! It all adds up to the divine number 7. cuz I feel silly and whispy.