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Bachus on No name. by Plasticgirlwithgun 14 Dec 2002, 11:53 AM
i can relate, to eating boogers that big, and smelling my hand after i swipe at my scrotum =)
Andre on love song by <~> 14 Dec 2002, 11:02 AM
i used to play string bass. i love this poem!
Plasticgirlwithgun replying on No name. by Plasticgirlwithgun 14 Dec 2002, 10:54 AM
Nice to know.
little_angel_maria replying on A hug :) by little_angel_maria 14 Dec 2002, 9:27 AM
i dont know whta plagiatism is but yes i did write it thank you oih and razor u hate my writting dont u ur always cussing it neways i don care :) later y'all AVRIL LAVIGNE RULESSSSS!!!!!!
Bill Z Bub replying on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 14 Dec 2002, 8:23 AM
the moon! wish i could have seen that, but i'm a child of the 70's in the year of the rat.
NewbieMe on No name. by Plasticgirlwithgun 14 Dec 2002, 3:08 AM
Too much angst but I can relate =)
horus8 on No name. by Plasticgirlwithgun 13 Dec 2002, 10:17 PM
i want you to know that when i give her a good shove...well..i think of you. every time actually.v
god'swife replying on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 13 Dec 2002, 9:56 PM
Good questions boy, but right now I have to go help an old lady get into bed. I'll tackle you tomorrow, sometime after noon. I am the TEEVEE generation. 6 yrs old 12" from the black and white, I watched us walking. On the moon. I saw a Kennedy shot not once but twice.
Well, I finally took the time to read through this, and was (of course) quite impressed. Irreverently comical, clever, and stylish. Excellent job.
New Life Drug replying on When Im Gone by New Life Drug 13 Dec 2002, 8:32 PM
yes yes it needs work. Every time I try to edit it, it goes to "Final freedom of Jason" gaaahh. after the glitch I will butcher it. I like the numbers though. They add originality and when I thought of this, it was kind of like a list in my head. I suppose the flow interruption is annoying, but I like to that sort of thing. Take one last breathe and pour out whatever was in my head. But I think it doesnt fit in this poem. It contradicts the whole simple list thing. Good day.
New Life Drug replying on The final freedom of Jason by New Life Drug 13 Dec 2002, 8:27 PM
I'm sorry.. Friday the 13th sequal ahhh. Good idea, but I wouldn't know where to start. However, the texas chainsaw massacre might be something I could pull off
Bill Z Bub replying on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 13 Dec 2002, 7:33 PM
is it so wrong to make funny words for the tv generation, why is okay to make a reference to a book but not a tv show? because you and your friends have read the book? Its all just beautiful stories oh well
<{Baba^Yaga}> on A hard life by INTRANSIT 13 Dec 2002, 7:07 PM
http://www.gangbox.com/mp3/thorn%20apple%20the%20baby%20fat.mp3 nice retouches here's a x-mas present. enjoy.
Bachus replying on To Kiss by Jody Conn 13 Dec 2002, 3:38 PM
horus8 is preparing for a coors light audition, Ranger, so i will be speaking on his behalf, first off, the poem is a sure dandy, but the serial number at the bottom unless it means June, 2001 by jody conn (which it does whoops!) so back to first off again ah...i don't think 'jody' needs any constructive criticism..i believe that she has a fine grasp on her writing and is aware of what she's doing, so back to why horus8 hated the poem in is words "cheesy vagina banter best left for dike bars or a stage performance of the vagina monolouges" here is it's male coonter part in two minutes using two of my five last braincells [To Blow (free verse) by Bachus A hard blow on whithered shaft. A lackluster sobbing rod. This turd-scented naked pud. I suck by the hour. Like pittiful piss with tasteless dour. Such hard and dispicable horror. All lust and visions abandoned. This Richard (dik) never ours to blow. BFD122002 but now feeling exhausted from the strain of writing that equally inspiring piece, Ranger...i will nap..here's a ten for your earnest..hopes, dreams, sense of justice..merry christmas.10! <for the amount of layers involved in it all well the two layers, anyway>
Bachus replying on Bilboards, and music, just shouldn't be mixed. by Bachus 13 Dec 2002, 3:18 PM
was he a judge on american idol?
Bachus replying on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus 13 Dec 2002, 3:05 PM
i agree...i liked the decepticons so much cooler of a name than the autobots, also the cartoons theme song, harder to quit hummimg than the a-teams, or the smurfs..i hate good jingles, they're like herpes...relentless.
Bachus replying on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus 13 Dec 2002, 3:02 PM
interesting...what might he turn into? a faiery mound or a clear running brook. yes, disturbing indeed.
god'swife replying on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT 13 Dec 2002, 2:10 PM
I would like to get tight with Zzinnia, that would loads of fun I'm certain. Can you pick me up where the 60 and the 605 meet, then drop me of and Zzinni's barn? I'll bring some 40 yr. old scotch and home-made empanadas. She can let me in on all the secrets.
Best bitchiness I've heard in a while. fun lovin' criminals are delightful.
good one.9