Bachus
on No name. by Plasticgirlwithgun
14 Dec 2002, 11:53 AM
i can relate, to eating boogers that big, and smelling my hand after i swipe at my scrotum =)
Nice to know.
i dont know whta plagiatism is but yes i did write it thank you oih and razor u hate my writting dont u ur always cussing it neways i don care :) later y'all AVRIL LAVIGNE RULESSSSS!!!!!!
the moon! wish i could have seen that, but i'm a child of the 70's in the year of the rat.
Too much angst but I can relate =)
i want you to know that when i give her a good shove...well..i think of you. every time actually.v
Good questions boy, but right now I have to go help an old lady get into bed. I'll tackle you tomorrow, sometime after noon. I am the TEEVEE generation. 6 yrs old 12" from the black and white, I watched us walking. On the moon.
I saw a Kennedy shot not once but twice.
Well, I finally took the time to read through this, and was (of course) quite impressed. Irreverently comical, clever, and stylish. Excellent job.
yes yes it needs work. Every time I try to edit it, it goes to "Final freedom of Jason" gaaahh. after the glitch I will butcher it. I like the numbers though. They add originality and when I thought of this, it was kind of like a list in my head. I suppose the flow interruption is annoying, but I like to that sort of thing. Take one last breathe and pour out whatever was in my head. But I think it doesnt fit in this poem. It contradicts the whole simple list thing. Good day.
I'm sorry.. Friday the 13th sequal ahhh. Good idea, but I wouldn't know where to start. However, the texas chainsaw massacre might be something I could pull off
is it so wrong to make funny words for the tv generation,
why is okay to make a reference to a book
but not a tv show?
because you and your friends have read the book?
Its all just beautiful stories
oh well
http://www.gangbox.com/mp3/thorn%20apple%20the%20baby%20fat.mp3
nice retouches here's a x-mas present. enjoy.
horus8 is preparing for a coors light audition, Ranger, so i will be speaking on his behalf, first off, the poem is a sure dandy, but the serial number at the bottom unless it means June, 2001 by jody conn (which it does whoops!) so back to first off again ah...i don't think 'jody' needs any constructive criticism..i believe that she has a fine grasp on her writing and is aware of what she's doing, so back to why horus8 hated the poem in is words "cheesy vagina banter best left for dike bars or a stage performance of the vagina monolouges" here is it's male coonter part in two minutes using two of my five last braincells [To Blow (free verse) by Bachus
A hard blow on whithered shaft.
A lackluster sobbing rod.
This turd-scented naked pud.
I suck by the hour.
Like pittiful piss with tasteless dour.
Such hard and dispicable horror.
All lust and visions abandoned.
This Richard (dik) never ours to blow.
BFD122002
but now feeling exhausted from the strain of writing that equally inspiring piece, Ranger...i will nap..here's a ten for your earnest..hopes, dreams, sense of justice..merry christmas.10! <for the amount of layers involved in it all well the two layers, anyway>
was he a judge on american idol?
i agree...i liked the decepticons so much cooler of a name than the autobots, also the cartoons theme song, harder to quit hummimg than the a-teams, or the smurfs..i hate good jingles, they're like herpes...relentless.
interesting...what might he turn into? a faiery mound or a clear running brook. yes, disturbing indeed.
I would like to get tight with Zzinnia, that would loads of fun I'm certain. Can you pick me up where the 60 and the 605 meet, then drop me of and Zzinni's barn? I'll bring some 40 yr. old scotch and home-made empanadas. She can let me in on all the secrets.
Best bitchiness I've heard in a while. fun lovin' criminals are delightful.
good one.9