smlink84
on I'm a homicidal kind of guy (spoof of every 'down-home' song you've ever heard) by Yardbird
22 Nov 2002, 7:52 PM
I like it.
Funny.
Do you know what Free verse is?
And I will love to hate this poem forever, with all my heart. cliche
You should really write for Hallmark.
this is lovely, surely...no one wants to read it though because of the title..see how everyone is avoiding it? that's because they assume they know what its about because of the title. try something like jet streams or the santa annas...indian summer, indian breeze. who knows...all i know is no ones biting your hook. here's an eight for your wait.8.
How do you get by in school writing like this? You are raping the English language. That is a crime. Pimple poems by 15 year olds are also a crime. Burn this at once or I am going to have someone call the FBI. As for the other comment: You were a foolish to make it and it basically showed that you do not have a clue as to what you are talking about. And you do not have any idea of what friendship is. You need to experience it properly to understand how to write a poem about it. Stay awake in English class and practice your spelling.
No. If all that mattered was getting across a certain message it wouldn't be poetry, by definition. Or something.
obviously.u
whne you wrote that you seemed to know nothin of what you were talking about and making a joke of it all. my mom had cancer. i have seen it all. it wasnt easy nor was it something everyoen can understand til it happens. WTF does that have to do with my poetry?? how i comment on it effects how u do me?? i hope im taking this all the wrong way, else you're just not even a person inside.
sorry i just dont get why everyone that says something its usually negative. maybe you all are right i cant write, but it doesnt mean im going to stop. we studied a guys poetry today in english. he said that a good poem is one that reveals the truth.. that is what i do. they may not make sense nor have correct grammar, but if you get the message and relate isn't that all that matters?
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yea this sonnet was really hard to write. it doesnt make sense liek the general idea is hard to get i know, but we had certian rules we had to write by. and it was hard to write it in IP.
WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON HERE WHY ARE YOU ALL ON BLADE'S BACK?CANT WE ALL JUST GET ALONG? LEAVE BLADE ALONE HES DONE JACK TO ALL OF YOU DARK ANGEL UR JUST PISSED AT THE FACT THAT BLADE IS WAY COOLER THYAN YOU GOD DARK ANGEL GET OVER YOURSELF LOOK ATYOURSELF TALK RUBBISH YOU SOUND LIKE A FOUR YEAR OLD BIG UP MY BOY BLADE *HUGZ* ANYWAYZ DARK ANGEL U GOT A PROBLEM U COME TO ME AIGHT OH AND UR JOKES YES THEY'RE POINTLESS DO YOU SEE ME LAUGHING@?OOMG ANSWER IS NO!
are you shooting for a limited edition smurf anthology?
jackass. try hurling a midget next time. safer.-
Gentlemen aren't sinners because Gentlemen are christians.
All men are sinners
this is exemplirary work to the tenth degree. 10.h
not speicfically, but generally yes. :)