Britpop
on At A Loss by NewbieMe
11 Nov 2002, 9:06 AM
I think this is really good and I feel that it has been really thought out. The reader gets quite a degree of sympathy towards the end I think.
I am one of the random people arguing on this page, I just though I would let you know, since I am using this page, that your poem is seriously crap!!
cancel time--very nice.
funny. (but wrong rhyme scheme to be a limerick.)
my god, man! get your meds adjusted for the sake of all that is sacred and profane!
this bit is just not working for you settle. sorry. no poontang for you.
You are a visionary for our future, a pretty pathetic future but hey!
you're kidding, right?
The use of the word 'lychees' deserves a 10 alone
Really good.....but cuddlebunnies???
Really enjoyed that. thanks
Some really good similies in there. Clever.
Good stuff, Maria! It flows a lot better than your earlier work, and I think that restricting the length has helped to make your ideas more concise. Overall, nicely done - your poetry just keeps getting better and better! 8 :)
Oh, and by the way, your poems are still pretentious drivel. Just to let you know...
(in tone suggesting mock submission) You cannot begin to imagine how threatened I feel...
Keep trying, bub!
cleverdevice
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Nov 2002, 3:08 AM
Excellent. How can this not get 10s across the board? This must have taken ages to write but its well worth it.
When the dad comes does he actually 'come'? That makes it more meaningful probably.
I've been told by Blade to support him on this one. Its true though, there isn't enough respect for one anothers work. Maybe we don't like it for one reason or another but its only an opinion and no-one can prove an opinion right or wrong. Ever. But yeah, go Blade. (You've mad her all self-defensive now with that ridiculously long numbered comment. Keep it up!)
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