"but I always betray myself....." is novel and good, leaving fingerprints is also a good image. The rest is boring. A conversation heard at the back of the bus.

The title is fantastic. I think I'll steal it. the poem itself I'm disappointed to say is cliche and predictable.

There is only one mark you can give this

Hmmm

swell. biting.

I think you should cut the last four lines - 'wrote' just isn't grammatical here and spoils the verse, although you need it for your rhyme - and anyway, the first stanza is really strong on its own.

And you call my poem chilly? This is icy and sinister.

That's amazing. The fox reminded me of several disturbing childhood memories of a fur farm. Chilly.

I'm grinning like a demon despite the mental image. clever.

It's funny at least. Sorry kitty, you don't write well enough to do too much for me. on the other hand, if anonymous online diddling with the morbidly obese Everquest player described by Dark Angel is what puts a smile on your face, who am I to judge?

the end makes me think of a cut-out picture shrine with incense and candles.

oh dear

The ending is so damn boring...

Humanity hasn't sunk this low, it's simply always been this low and never risen higher.

I love a nice adolescent tantrum.