Re: a comment on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_	richa 81.178.246.197	19-Apr-05/3:02 PM
I used to think that but then I realised I was thinking about 'Stan' and 'my name is' and all his other lyrics were utterly thick.
Re: a comment on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_	Goad 80.132.253.209	19-Apr-05/2:49 PM
Eminem is an extraordinarily talented poet. I know it will be considered very uncool for me to say so, but he really is. I don't like rap much, and when he's doing the whole gang bang thing I think it's boring. But some of his lyrics? breathtaking skill with word-smithing.
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Ranger 131.251.0.55	19-Apr-05/2:23 PM
Possibly the most convincing incentive for me to attend Church and become anorexic. In that order. If the Lord is not proud of you, I would be most terribly surprised. God bless.
Re: Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Ranger 131.251.0.55	19-Apr-05/2:13 PM
You, sir, are the reason I couldn't keep my as yet unbrowned hands from this site.
Re: Sins of a Father by Mona Lisa	Dovina 204.250.12.246	19-Apr-05/1:52 PM
Why not use punctuation within the lines, since you're using it at the ends? I like "coughed a bastard" and "coughed at amen." But much of this eludes me.
Re: a comment on Middle-Aged White Woman by Dovina	Dovina 204.250.12.246	19-Apr-05/1:36 PM
2) Oh, I see. I am supposed to bow down to your comments because you say your are more educated than I am. 6) That's a stupid suggestion because the poem is about what I want it to be about, not what you want it to be about.
Re: ab*defg by Goad	Ranger 131.251.0.55	19-Apr-05/1:27 PM
ye-es...you can, of course, remove keys from the keyboard.
Re: a comment on Gaping Hole by sonawrote	Ranger 131.251.0.55	19-Apr-05/1:26 PM
Ever considered Polyfilla?
Re: Five on Buddha against Bruce Lee by Luzr	Ranger 131.251.0.55	19-Apr-05/1:21 PM
ha!
Re: f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_	Ranger 131.251.0.55	19-Apr-05/1:14 PM
Oddly enough the big votes here do seem to go with the big words rather than the big attitudes. I liked being shouted at although a couple of the rhymes weren't my cup of tea (although I'm in no position to criticise other peoples' rhymes), 8 from me.
Re: Reincarnation by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	19-Apr-05/10:13 AM
BREAKING NEWS: Complete twat elected pope. God be praised!
Re: a comment on Reincarnation by Dovina	Dovina 204.250.12.246	19-Apr-05/9:09 AM
Of course, I find no inane or wrong comments in my repitoir, except for a few that were intended as funny. I would appreciate a few examples.
Re: f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_	ho_hum 129.169.158.92	19-Apr-05/8:29 AM
Why not stop banging your head against a brick wall on poemranker.com, and start your own site called angstyteenagerapranker.com. Do you want to be the next Eminem or something? This one, however, did make me laugh. So you get a 5 for it. You lose marks for it being just a bit too much like 'Stan' by Eminem in terms of the sheer amount of ranting rage. Take it easy. Actually you can get a 6 for the unexpected Deng Xiaoping reference, although you should capitalise proper nouns. Fuck not f*ck.
Re: Bad grammar and spelling mistakes by Damien	Bluemonkey 170.141.68.99	19-Apr-05/7:44 AM
Damien is a fitting name because you are the Antichrist of poetry.
Re: a comment on Reincarnation by Dovina	Goad 80.132.208.141	19-Apr-05/7:20 AM
I'm certain he meant it sincerely, because it's an excellent -- and interesting -- anwswer. That's what's intriguing about you: this mixing of comments that are mature, astute, thoughtful with comments that are head-scratchingly inane/bizarre or just plain wrong.
Re: a comment on My Dumb Choice...YOU by sonawrote	Goad 80.132.208.141	19-Apr-05/6:35 AM
"Can you say something good about anything. " --yes, and I do. You wouldn't know anything about it though, because you never bothered to look at anybody's posting history to get an idea of what they were about before you started pissing on them. (Or licking their ass, for that matter, lol. lolololol. lol.)
Re: a comment on Reincarnation by Dovina	Dovina 204.250.12.246	19-Apr-05/6:19 AM
I will assume tentatively that you mean "Oh, good answer" sincerely. I am content in my menial existance, but find Dovina exciting in the way fantasy is.
Re: a comment on Reincarnation by Dovina	Dovina 204.250.12.246	19-Apr-05/6:17 AM
It's the trouble with all religion. answers are too easy.
Re: a comment on Reincarnation by Dovina	Dovina 204.250.12.246	19-Apr-05/6:16 AM
The third stanza relates reincarnation to heaven and ghosts in that it projects life past death, and maybe before birth. I thought it was in interesting comparison, though admitedly not developed in the poem.
Re: a comment on Trying to get signed? by Damien	ho_hum 129.169.158.92	19-Apr-05/5:20 AM
Wrong. I said what you made me THINK. I made no assumptions. You, however, have reinforced my opinions that you are just indeed quite insecure. On a second point, I quote THREE of your statements from your poems, from which I assemble a point of view. Not one line only. What you don't say is whether my opinions of you are accurate. I think most of those who have been on the receiving end to your childish tantrums regarding the marks awarded you would agree with me. What do you think? ALLOWED, not ALOUD. And even so I don't get your point, are you saying that in some metaphorical sense you are not asking for an opinion on your work? You also fail to answer the point regarding your (non) use of grammar. Perhaps the "key that can begin this process" is for you to accept that you could improve your writing, and your response to the comments of others. Especially when said comments are not a direct attack but an honest critique.