Re: Kansas City by PodPoet	Dovina 12.72.10.244	9-Apr-05/10:39 AM
Well stated, though I disagree with your conclusion.
Re: science by whispern_smoke_wisp	Dovina 12.72.10.244	9-Apr-05/10:37 AM
Science has explained away none of the magic of love between dog and human. The study of evolution only enhances the magic.
Re: a comment on Alive by emilyowey	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.225.148.41	9-Apr-05/10:25 AM
Excellent edit Dovina. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on Alive by emilyowey	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.225.148.41	9-Apr-05/10:20 AM
First off there is a reply button next on the right hand side of every comment, use it. Second, its not about what you feel anymore the second you hit the submit button is it? You are being told, very blunt and honestly, that no, it doesn't add to the "continuity and style". It makes what could have been some okay verse, better used as toliet paper than read.
Re: Before Existence by Jsylum	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	9-Apr-05/9:57 AM
i love some of the imagery
Re: Rustling Wind by laura2224rn	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	9-Apr-05/9:53 AM
i'm sorry but there is no answer to all the worldy grief's - that is one question that has puzzled philosophers for centuries
Re: The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	9-Apr-05/9:44 AM
again,this is senryu not haiku
Re: Kansas City by PodPoet	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	9-Apr-05/9:26 AM
excellent
Re: You Were There by danevie	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	9-Apr-05/9:14 AM
you have the disconcerting habit of having someone remedy your ills in the past tense while you are still in the present-----
Re: Within A World by forestchild7	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	9-Apr-05/9:04 AM
"as if it wil all my problems mend" ---- if you can't make your rhyming sound at all natural perhaps you should not try rhyming - this sounds incredibly forced
Re: Coloured waifs home by horus8	edpeterson 68.252.103.203	9-Apr-05/8:40 AM
This is actually a chancrous cock on a string
Re: a comment on Mixtapes (or We Always End Where We Began) by philn	philn 152.163.100.195	9-Apr-05/8:18 AM
Mixtapes aren't always for another person. In this case I made a mixtape of songs that reminded me of her. Out of curiousity, is your rating for the poem or for mixtapes in general?
Re: Mixtapes (or We Always End Where We Began) by philn	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.21.223	9-Apr-05/7:24 AM
Mix tapes are pathetic. When you make a mix tape, you think, "How eclectic she'll think my tastes are!" You think juxtaposing a "beautiful acoustic guitar song" with a "hard rock" song is deeply meaningful.
Re: Coloured waifs home by horus8	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.139	8-Apr-05/6:54 PM
this is actually a senryu
Re: a comment on Mixtapes (or We Always End Where We Began) by philn	philn 152.163.100.195	8-Apr-05/6:30 PM
It might just be me, but I'm alot like John Cusek in High Fidelity. If I find that I really like someone I generally find that I listen to a lot of love songs during that period and often make mixtapes for that person or of songs that remind me of that person. I wrote this because I was (and still am somewhat) frustrated about a relationship that doesn't really go anywhere. I thought the parallel was interesting because I kept making mixtapes (cheesy, I know) and the songs would transition just like the relationship would progress, but in the end the mixtape and the relationship didn't really go anywhere. It always ended where it began. It's the same way in life, but I also used that because I think it's somewhat ironic how dead it feels to be in love in the spring right now. Birds and chirping, the sun is shining. It just makes me sick. Heh.
Re: a comment on Middle-Aged White Woman by Dovina	Dovina 17.255.240.138	8-Apr-05/5:23 PM
Look, we already promised you your ten acres and a mule. We're just working out a few details, then we'll deliver.
Re: a comment on Moments (or) Suicide by Dovina	Dovina 17.255.240.138	8-Apr-05/5:20 PM
Well, I guess I didn't make that clear. I graded my life on a straight-line percentage basis. Please grade yours on curves witnessed, curves felt, curves entered, or any other basis you choose for counting Moments.
Re: Moments (or) Suicide by Dovina	edpeterson 68.252.103.203	8-Apr-05/4:30 PM
Are we supposed to give a numerical vote on your life, or on the poem? Life: 2.1, poem: -0-
Re: Moments (or) Suicide by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 69.238.208.181	8-Apr-05/4:11 PM
Are grading your life on strict percentages or are you willing to use a curve?
Re: Middle-Aged White Woman by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 69.238.208.181	8-Apr-05/4:07 PM
It's good but I want ten acres and a mule before I'll let myself forget what "you people" did to those people