Comments byDovina, 2481–2500 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on First by Dovina 15 Aug 2005, 2:10 PM
Never before have you zeroed me. Why?
replying on Words by Dovina 15 Aug 2005, 2:09 PM
Correction: I ignore vain praise as many times as it is given, but htank you for commenting.
replying on Words by Dovina 15 Aug 2005, 2:06 PM
Shift+F7 brings up Thesaurus in Ms Word. I suppose that's like holding the ladder.
on Shadow by TLRufener 12 Aug 2005, 7:27 PM
I like it except for the use of "them" and "they" in referring to a person. The ending is great.
on sculpture by ThePariahDog 12 Aug 2005, 7:25 PM
The first 4 lines are good, given the tight restraint you've chosen. The last 4 lines drift from the theme.
on Forever by my side by RGSsparky 12 Aug 2005, 7:23 PM
Good thoughts, but need better poetic expression.
on The cat who would fly by nentwined 12 Aug 2005, 7:15 PM
Do you mean "off my face"?

"a past that's not yet happened" the cycle, the simple thing.

It does seem that simple sometimes.
on Home by Bethy 9 Aug 2005, 6:54 PM
I like the rhythm.

She walked up and down

paw > pa?

The last 2 lines confuse. Maybe you mean "she'd do anything but go back there"
replying on First by Dovina 9 Aug 2005, 12:44 PM
Yep, you're onto me. Don't know where all these other comments come from.
replying on My Prince by XOXScottishgrlXOX 9 Aug 2005, 11:37 AM
Nope. Wrong.
replying on First by Dovina 9 Aug 2005, 11:35 AM
No, only a certain girl was Jerry's kid.
replying on First by Dovina 9 Aug 2005, 11:35 AM
I don't think either of them fell into any pit blind.
replying on First by Dovina 9 Aug 2005, 11:34 AM
?
replying on First by Dovina 9 Aug 2005, 11:34 AM
Neither Geneses nor Jerry is demeaning to women in my opinion.
on REMEBER by prettyktm 9 Aug 2005, 7:56 AM
You've got potentisl for a good poem here, but the grammar is terrible.
on My Prince by XOXScottishgrlXOX 9 Aug 2005, 7:52 AM
"two" "dark"

Would you love your Prince if you discover he had lied to you?
replying on More Than The World by XOXScottishgrlXOX 9 Aug 2005, 7:42 AM
Thanks for saying "even Dovina didn't catch it." Makes a person feel almost omnipotent.
replying on Never born. by | Broken | 9 Aug 2005, 7:39 AM
You can say those things, but you cannot prove them, just as CS Lewis cannot prove his statement. You are applying blunt logic to sensual things, and it comes out terse and without feeling. I'm not opposed to mixing logic and feelings, but I think you go too far in the logic direction.
on Dear Aunt Leonard by T. Jonathron Remp 8 Aug 2005, 2:09 PM
Silly
on Mirrored by MacFrantic 8 Aug 2005, 2:07 PM
Cute, but could be cuter.