poemranker ::20 most recent comments by klosterfobik (41-60)

Comments byklosterfobik, 41–60 back. Include replies

on Two Basic Forces by dougsoderstrom 1 Sep 2004, 7:38 PM
Is this poetry?
on Andrew by Spindle 28 Aug 2004, 9:16 PM
I look into his eyes and I'm tossed and bound
I bury my face into her breast and want to masterbate and live forever
I kiss her lips and pull away just so I can suck ass again.
on Internal Dialogue (Mental Cock-Slapping & Anal Discipline) by DreamerSupreme 28 Aug 2004, 7:19 PM
What is wrong with you?Was this an ode to yourself?
Either way it really - truly sucks!Are you a confused
13 year old who's been molested by a gang of Eagle Scouts?Try something besides poetry for your venting.
Considering this ranting poem,I believe your the mayor
of Dimsville!
on Surfer by INTRANSIT 28 Aug 2004, 7:23 PM
Thought of back when and salt blue ocean....very nice.
on some deleted poem 24 Aug 2004, 5:25 PM
I do like this particular poem,but I really love
the idea behind it.It could be awesome with just a bit
of revision. -9-
on A Stitch In Time by Dovina 22 Aug 2004, 8:52 PM
You captured a moment of us all.
Very well wrighten.-9-
on The 80's by wilco 21 Aug 2004, 11:10 PM
I like the thought behind the lyrics - very nostalgic,yet depressing in a certain way.
on The Grand Adjustment by horus8 15 Aug 2004, 6:26 AM
Do you sell cars?
on some deleted poem 15 Aug 2004, 2:08 PM
Well done son - I gave it a nine.
Could use just a bit of amendment.
on I Can't Move On by Sirens_Voice 15 Aug 2004, 4:39 PM
the ending is good - try a little amending though. -8-
on some deleted poem 15 Aug 2004, 6:23 AM
Nice feeling but the words could be more powerful - I liked it though it could use revision. -7-
on some deleted poem 11 Aug 2004, 8:06 PM
Really republicans should refrain from any attempts at prose whatsoever...really.
on Navy Pier by Doug 11 Aug 2004, 8:42 PM
Were you afraid to fall in love with a girl unworthy?
on some deleted poem 11 Aug 2004, 6:47 PM
I like this except for the ending,maybe change the last 4 lines. -8-
on some deleted poem 11 Aug 2004, 6:53 PM
You just had an orgasm - sure all is rigth w/ the world.This could be better if you added a little flavor(taste,touch,hear,smell or sight)?still decent.
on Swimming in Space & Fishing for the Luridness Monster by SupremeDreamer 2 Sep 2004, 6:36 PM
Quite lame.
on Let your heart roam free by Leah11 2 Sep 2004, 7:33 PM
Like the feel and honesty - structure could be better.
-8.5-
on Friend Ship by ChefKSP 8 Sep 2004, 4:22 PM
Are you for real?
on Lost Soul by ChefKSP 8 Sep 2004, 4:26 PM
No offence - but please try a different form of expression.Poetry is just not your cup of tea.